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“ Shay Caroline Simmons   “I was an ace at algebra and got A's on the exams but the teacher dinged me for always refusing to do the homework on stuff I already knew, so my final grade, despite knowing the subject, was a C” “There's a poem in there somewhere” ======= let us explicate, even holistically diagram, said sentence, perhaps there is  GREAT truth lurking nearby, or in the white spaces our eyes use to ponder, consider, and just have fun with childhood inequities that yet tankle,^ and surely, rankle what biz of mine, she bethinks, hopefully, while sizable big, big grinning, well the same **** rigid thinking cursed me, ‘crept the course was English, and I took it with a very large of Sodium {Na]^^ absolut ***** there’s a poem here, about injustice cruelty and the failure of our educational system but that ain’t the one I’m agonna write, there are poems in most things, of the most us for the mundane, but this grievance (mine too) has too long festered and we deserve justice! of the poetic kind so, this goes out to all of us, who sat in courses that did not challenge us, and the system could, would not bend beyond the dividing line of measurement & creative thinking and yet we survived… the irony resides that I went onto live a livelihood resting upon the world of figures, odds, theorems, and positive and negatives, but while my in my whiling away coyote days, accepting challenges from very accomplished writers like SCS, ex-algebra wizardesses go figure *all this drivel is just a hard driven nail in the head of those believers, that poems must be au naturel, thinges exquisite, lustered, well-behaved, and that is not incorrect, yet I find the irascible symmetry that fancy tickles in the small things, in the little ironies, in the simple puzzles that life ample provides, like: “There's a poem in there somewhere”
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Nov 5, 2025
Nov 5, 2025 at 3:24 PM UTC
Shay Caroline Simmons: “There's a poem in there somewhere”
“ Shay Caroline Simmons   “I was an ace at algebra and got A's on the exams but the teacher dinged me for always refusing to do the homework on stuff I already knew, so my final grade, despite knowing the subject, was a C” “There's a poem in there somewhere” ======= let us explicate, even holistically diagram, said sentence, perhaps there is  GREAT truth lurking nearby, or in the white spaces our eyes use to ponder, consider, and just have fun with childhood inequities that yet tankle,^ and surely, rankle what biz of mine, she bethinks, hopefully, while sizable big, big grinning, well the same **** rigid thinking cursed me, ‘crept the course was English, and I took it with a very large of Sodium {Na]^^ absolut ***** there’s a poem here, about injustice cruelty and the failure of our educational system but that ain’t the one I’m agonna write, there are poems in most things, of the most us for the mundane, but this grievance (mine too) has too long festered and we deserve justice! of the poetic kind so, this goes out to all of us, who sat in courses that did not challenge us, and the system could, would not bend beyond the dividing line of measurement & creative thinking and yet we survived… the irony resides that I went onto live a livelihood resting upon the world of figures, odds, theorems, and positive and negatives, but while my in my whiling away coyote days, accepting challenges from very accomplished writers like SCS, ex-algebra wizardesses go figure *all this drivel is just a hard driven nail in the head of those believers, that poems must be au naturel, thinges exquisite, lustered, well-behaved, and that is not incorrect, yet I find the irascible symmetry that fancy tickles in the small things, in the little ironies, in the simple puzzles that life ample provides, like: “There's a poem in there somewhere”
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A grey cloud covers her sky , Its raining in her mind tonight , first a drop made the vase leak and ever since its been spilling through her eyes . She cant figure out how to make it stop , as she doesn’t know why , So she just waits till it empties,she waits a lifeteime . And when her eyes aren’t the subject of a tsunami, it’s her heart that takes the weight of the entre ocean . it’s her heart that becomes blue , as an irregular rythm is set in motion , But her heart gets so full so fast, and the vase is only half empty , she feels it beating so hard , right beneath her skin . So she swallows It all , glad that now she feels it less , she’s meant to be eating and swallowing , so it all makes sense . Then suddenly she’s not hungry for anything but water and air , and even that is now suffocating . She chokes on it , drowns in it , as now it exudes from her pores , no matter how much gets out , there always seems to be more , oh the lord knows how she’d want it to stop ,  wants to stop it all. It fills her up , and fills her mouth,only for her to ***** it out , hoping its all of it , shes purposefully gags , ignoring her groans and moans that are now ever so loud . she empties her stomach's contents , that now has no water , no, only air. She hopes she's finally taken away part of the trouble and part of the blue that messed up her head . but the vase is only half empty , she reminds herself , still its begging for exit , a crack in it is enough for the story to repeat-itself .
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Jun 24, 2025
Jun 24, 2025 at 8:06 PM UTC
When it rains
A grey cloud covers her sky , Its raining in her mind tonight , first a drop made the vase leak and ever since its been spilling through her eyes . She cant figure out how to make it stop , as she doesn’t know why , So she just waits till it empties,she waits a lifeteime . And when her eyes aren’t the subject of a tsunami, it’s her heart that takes the weight of the entre ocean . it’s her heart that becomes blue , as an irregular rythm is set in motion , But her heart gets so full so fast, and the vase is only half empty , she feels it beating so hard , right beneath her skin . So she swallows It all , glad that now she feels it less , she’s meant to be eating and swallowing , so it all makes sense . Then suddenly she’s not hungry for anything but water and air , and even that is now suffocating . She chokes on it , drowns in it , as now it exudes from her pores , no matter how much gets out , there always seems to be more , oh the lord knows how she’d want it to stop ,  wants to stop it all. It fills her up , and fills her mouth,only for her to ***** it out , hoping its all of it , shes purposefully gags , ignoring her groans and moans that are now ever so loud . she empties her stomach's contents , that now has no water , no, only air. She hopes she's finally taken away part of the trouble and part of the blue that messed up her head . but the vase is only half empty , she reminds herself , still its begging for exit , a crack in it is enough for the story to repeat-itself .
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Let me show you one that's mine; She, sweet and strong Caroline. Her hair, a mess of own Her eyes, radiant of dawn, Her skin, under sunlight shine Oh sweet Caroline. In every journey she embarks, A new light, shines a new mark. Her feats cross the skyline, Oh proud Caroline. A palace in her name, It shall grow in fame. Own the throne, a while, My sweet Caroline.
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Mar 9, 2025
Mar 9, 2025 at 12:55 PM UTC
Ode to Caroline
~ March 2024 HP Poet: Caroline Shank Age: 77 Country: USA Question 1: A warm welcome to the HP Spotlight, Caroline. Please tell us about your background? Caroline Shank: "I am 77 and I live in Milwaukee, Wisconsin. When I worked for Barnes and Nobel for ten years, customers asked me frequently for suggestions. I believe 'The Alexandria Quartet' by Lawrence Durrell is a serious contender for best prose fiction which has been written. Also 'The English Patient' by Michael Ondaatje is such a teaching tool on how to write the greatest novel ever written. I digress." Question 2: How long have you been writing poetry, and for how long have you been a member of Hello Poetry? Caroline Shank: "I have been writing poetry since the adolescent striving of the very lonely. I am not sure how long I have been posting to Hello Poetry. At least 3 years, or maybe 5?" Question 3: What inspires you? (In other words, how does poetry happen for you). Caroline Shank: "The unusual image will send me running for pen and paper. Usually what inspires the senses: a wind, an odor or perfume. I still remember my love affair with Chloe perfume. And! English Leather! Those were the days. Great sadness or anger will send me to my laptop but those poems do not usually survive." Question 4: What does poetry mean to you? Caroline Shank: "Poetry means that I have a place in a wonderful place. Once in awhile." Question 5: Who are your favorite poets? Caroline Shank: "My favorite poet's are: T. S. Eliot, Rainer Maria Rilke (the Stephen Mitchell translations), E. E. Cummings. I am a fan of Sara Teasdale's, her From the Sea is amazing. I save Shakespeare for the best nuggets ever. Anna Peters, her “I Am Not a Gentle Person” is a tour'd if ever. I love the poetry that is a much needed relief from The Civil War. Especially Lorena. I guess that's a song. Only one poem of Ezra Pound's, The Metro. It is a graduate course in image exploration." Question 6: What other interests do you have? Caroline Shank: "I used to be a huge consumer of books. I read all the time. I find that at my age I can't keep reading without finding something else to do." Carlo C. Gomez: “We wish to thank you for giving us this opportunity to get to know the person behind the poet, Caroline! We are honored to add you to this series!” Caroline Shank: "Thank you, Carlo! I am very grateful for all the encouragement you have given me." Thank you everyone here at HP for taking the time to read this. We hope you enjoyed coming to know Caroline a little bit better. I surely did. It is our wish that these spotlights are helping everyone to further discover and appreciate their fellow poets. – Carlo C. Gomez We will post Spotlight #14 in April! ~
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Mar 1, 2024
Mar 1, 2024 at 10:25 PM UTC
HP Writers Spotlight: Caroline Shank
~ March 2024 HP Poet: Caroline Shank Age: 77 Country: USA Question 1: A warm welcome to the HP Spotlight, Caroline. Please tell us about your background? Caroline Shank: "I am 77 and I live in Milwaukee, Wisconsin. When I worked for Barnes and Nobel for ten years, customers asked me frequently for suggestions. I believe 'The Alexandria Quartet' by Lawrence Durrell is a serious contender for best prose fiction which has been written. Also 'The English Patient' by Michael Ondaatje is such a teaching tool on how to write the greatest novel ever written. I digress." Question 2: How long have you been writing poetry, and for how long have you been a member of Hello Poetry? Caroline Shank: "I have been writing poetry since the adolescent striving of the very lonely. I am not sure how long I have been posting to Hello Poetry. At least 3 years, or maybe 5?" Question 3: What inspires you? (In other words, how does poetry happen for you). Caroline Shank: "The unusual image will send me running for pen and paper. Usually what inspires the senses: a wind, an odor or perfume. I still remember my love affair with Chloe perfume. And! English Leather! Those were the days. Great sadness or anger will send me to my laptop but those poems do not usually survive." Question 4: What does poetry mean to you? Caroline Shank: "Poetry means that I have a place in a wonderful place. Once in awhile." Question 5: Who are your favorite poets? Caroline Shank: "My favorite poet's are: T. S. Eliot, Rainer Maria Rilke (the Stephen Mitchell translations), E. E. Cummings. I am a fan of Sara Teasdale's, her From the Sea is amazing. I save Shakespeare for the best nuggets ever. Anna Peters, her “I Am Not a Gentle Person” is a tour'd if ever. I love the poetry that is a much needed relief from The Civil War. Especially Lorena. I guess that's a song. Only one poem of Ezra Pound's, The Metro. It is a graduate course in image exploration." Question 6: What other interests do you have? Caroline Shank: "I used to be a huge consumer of books. I read all the time. I find that at my age I can't keep reading without finding something else to do." Carlo C. Gomez: “We wish to thank you for giving us this opportunity to get to know the person behind the poet, Caroline! We are honored to add you to this series!” Caroline Shank: "Thank you, Carlo! I am very grateful for all the encouragement you have given me." Thank you everyone here at HP for taking the time to read this. We hope you enjoyed coming to know Caroline a little bit better. I surely did. It is our wish that these spotlights are helping everyone to further discover and appreciate their fellow poets. – Carlo C. Gomez We will post Spotlight #14 in April! ~
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Billy Wynne Veracruz best baseball pitcher ever Me Mestizo beloved by the shore a teen a wannabe Mom wannabe wife. Within his theme songs In beautiful mystic Vera-cruz. From the Shaks restaurant my cashiering job Pitcher asked to walk by the ocean hand in hand. Baseball players eyes glared so sea-sky blue. Tallest Knight touching hands. Handsome king of hearts "Sweet Caroline song blasted on pitchers radio cassette player and " The great Pretender,* The hours long. Smooth all passion seed withheld and me fire firefly flew away.. ~~~ Kings like you ought to have many wives and many babies Your kind are the crown jewels of fatherhood and motherhood best super human seeds divine Your legacy rules Earth. ~~~ I found my own reign, great treasures my king heart of gold like mine, called me beauty himself Beast. Loved to be a one woman man for a one man woman like me his rddbba-Ginny. We fell in love at first sight my true love my handsome American. Such elite chose me to change Earth he was the bridge and me his worldbringer portal to heaven his star seed. My once upon a time my twin soul, twin flame King of hearts, became my imaginary best friend my owl of wisdom my everything. Our theme songs were Spill your heart to me, and what a wonderful world by Armstrong L. We were also beauty and the Beast. The memory of my knight my king lover, my true love my companion, keeps me safe and sound. ~~~~ By: Mr. and Mrs. Andrews. Honoring Karijinbba
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Jun 23, 2023
Jun 23, 2023 at 8:35 AM UTC
Wynne Pitcher & Ginny lamp
How could you know? How did you take All the right parts Kind, gentle, and sweet What did you learn? What made you able The first time you tried To make our lives complete When did you know? When did the stars So neatly align To bring wonder into our world Why is it us? Why did the heavens Choose people like we To parent our precious girl
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Dec 13, 2019
Dec 13, 2019 at 1:21 PM UTC
Carolina
All my life I’ve never been quite sure, Rused by the perpetually eclipsing penumbral blur, Until I met a chouette with a heart so pure, Wherein winter’s eve could emulate a Summery Demure.
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May 9, 2019
May 9, 2019 at 1:11 PM UTC
S.D. (Summery Demure)
"MISS CAROLINE" Humanity is rare, in this world today,           loyalty is bare, just listen to what               people say! Most people seem soulless, hearts callous.   In the woods is where, I find renewing of my mind                                         and                                       spirit. When I venture out, I take one that is loyal,                         trustworthy                                  and                                 kind. It doesn't fit well with me that as an animal                    she is defined. My Miss Caroline has more compassion than these humans      passing through. She could teach the human   race; all about true humanity with grace. So when you've lost your way and your head is filled with the world's noise, then don't forget to return to that peaceful place with a friend... more human than the human race. A friend like mine that is loyal until the end of time. When i venture out, I take one that is loyal, trustworthy & kind. It doesn't fit well with me that as an animal she's defined. ~SacredInkedBlood©
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Apr 25, 2018
Apr 25, 2018 at 7:56 PM UTC
"Miss Caroline"
she drank slow but had this skip in her dance. she ordered me a gin and tonic on the rocks. she eyed me across the street (i’m losing track of time). she marched in front of me, leading me to an apartment. the walls were painted black and the lights were a shade of blue rain. there were two floors in the penthouse. she giggled when i told her how nervous i was. i felt my glass shake, this mixture of pale ale and oranges resembled a tsunami. my eyes convulsed like cracked sidewalks during earthquakes; my teeth were grinding, (not like a dance to ****** but rather the last lick of hope for the protagonist in slasher flicks screaming for help). she told me everything would be okay. she undressed herself and told me god doesn’t watch her when she sleeps; rather, he takes the night off and works overtime in the morning. i fell in love on the second floor of her apartment, i don’t know why it took me two stories to tell her.
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Mar 16, 2016
Mar 16, 2016 at 12:45 PM UTC
elle a besoin d'une calculatrice d'or pour diviser
At the 50 + An old lot coming from the monotonic ringing melody of Graham Bell's gone the days of childhood , adolescence and to breath sighs !ah the kisses for her lips and eyes to watch as she walked on pedestrian , how often she moves her curvy hips , What's ahead !anytime anywhere , even this very  moment clocks could be locked always tightening the noose around , Death that only clips ,we're acting childish in our shells , In a trance kept lone , social gaining kilos of fats and accumulating distances  !  Ah though miles we're apart but isolated and in love , dancing  rhythmic on keys and board of Dell's , what's to hide how much we seek the harmony we lost in quest unreached as ever asking where the soul dwells , All exit reveals in each of thyself opened are the many hells we are no more child but to act childish whenever in love , only  it tells ,
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Sep 11, 2015
Sep 11, 2015 at 5:54 AM UTC
No more child but acting childish
Pictures of your tubes and a wooden cross Engraved is all I know of you. I wasn't yet a thought when perhaps you wrapped a Tiny hand 'round a trembling finger to feel a beat, Or when maybe you cried just enough for everyone Who kissed your little head. I sidestepped all of your goings on and the grief By a few years, but I will always miss you. I will miss our bond. You didn't stay long enough to grow into your mannerisms, But I wonder what we could have shared. Would you have been funny or serious? Together or scattered? Happy? Somehow you've always been there for me. You listened when I didn't know anyone else Would and your flowers became my sanctuary. Maybe you would kick my *** for Being so uselessly sentimental, And maybe you wouldn't. It gets cold here, but you know that; I hope you rest easy in your little garden, Fit for a princess.
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May 13, 2015
May 13, 2015 at 7:29 PM UTC
Dear Caroline