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"where did all it start to go wrong, when my doctor told me i didn't have long, cancer treatments too **** expensive- wife's in charge and I'm **** retentive, can't get a job,can't get a loan, maybe I can figure how to work from home? My future's like Heisenberg,too uncertain, provide for my family,before its curtains... I'm a chemistry teacher and chemistry rules me, but so many unknown's too easy to fool me, but how can I do it?can't even guess, unless,unless,I start to cook **** Unless as a teacher I get someone to school me, I know the principles(principals), just need the tools,see, I can't tell my wife-can't tell my son, that my stars burning out like a fading sun, a trailer park cookout,will it be a mess, first batch BITCH!(Jesse sample)total **** success, but success in this business can lead to death, p.e. number one,-Heisenberg of **** Gotta deal with this psycho,name of Tuco, might shake your hand,cut your throat or shoot you, I was a 9 to 5 loser-happy teaching chemistry, now I deal in in death,spreading pain and misery, My partners a junkie,my wife doesn't get- That I'm like a medical examiner,surrounded by death, Jesus Jesse you're a pane in my *** it's looking clear to me,you're too fond of the glass, mirror mirror,where's the fairest price for us?, I've heard of this one guy,name of Gus...
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Apr 3, 2016
Apr 3, 2016 at 4:06 PM UTC
The Heisenberg Principle(unfinished,and SPOILER WARNING)
Crackling. Rocking. Crackling. Creaking and oscillating, a century old Mahogany Wood seceded to the paSsage of time. Particles of sand, confounded by the Peninsula’s chaotic, blasting breeze now revealed a shade of burnt tar.    Outside of the second floor Maissonette, sways the rocking chair once warmed by Grandpa. A Tactless, impatient, rhythmic Requiem Bashes near the wiNdow pane as the sunset falls Under the frame.                                                               Empty Folklore presides like the Residue of a once lambent effigy…                                               SwOosh. Hush!            Cocktails were a Preamble to lunch like diabetes to Nephropathy. Corrosive Rhetoric seeped in to expose the ego of a Sommelier.      A smile would Parachute down when you needed it like Nicotine to remind that no Precedent had been set, just an Anomaly.                      Cutthroat beginnings, this was no Analog man.         In grade school his Cosmos found Zion and “The world to come”.         This baby’s Cradle, abandoned High atop a mountain was blown by a Chinook towards the Atlantic.                 “I was found swallowed in a stained Table cloth by Balkan children on a treasure hunt, with no Guarantee and no resignatIon. "                      The boTtle narrates these chronicles and a smile parachutes down when you need it like nicotine.                                           Dionysus Crafted his accounts while most Garnered his spiels with Snide.                               As they witnessed dream remembrance; he thought his memory was Presumably accurate, and although his tales were triFling to the gathering audience, they became his Heliocentric history.             Calling me a young Galleon and handing me a map, Grandpa scanned his hand across the vast land        guaranteeing trEasure would be found if I had no resignation.                This Asinine assertion to my teenage sister Symbolized the Barring of her unheeding imagination by time and then a smile parachuted down just when she needed it like nicotine. _TRF
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Dec 14, 2016
Dec 14, 2016 at 11:13 AM UTC
Periodical Obscurities
Crackling. Rocking. Crackling. Creaking and oscillating, a century old Mahogany Wood seceded to the paSsage of time. Particles of sand, confounded by the Peninsula’s chaotic, blasting breeze now revealed a shade of burnt tar.    Outside of the second floor Maissonette, sways the rocking chair once warmed by Grandpa. A Tactless, impatient, rhythmic Requiem Bashes near the wiNdow pane as the sunset falls Under the frame.                                                               Empty Folklore presides like the Residue of a once lambent effigy…                                               SwOosh. Hush!            Cocktails were a Preamble to lunch like diabetes to Nephropathy. Corrosive Rhetoric seeped in to expose the ego of a Sommelier.      A smile would Parachute down when you needed it like Nicotine to remind that no Precedent had been set, just an Anomaly.                      Cutthroat beginnings, this was no Analog man.         In grade school his Cosmos found Zion and “The world to come”.         This baby’s Cradle, abandoned High atop a mountain was blown by a Chinook towards the Atlantic.                 “I was found swallowed in a stained Table cloth by Balkan children on a treasure hunt, with no Guarantee and no resignatIon. "                      The boTtle narrates these chronicles and a smile parachutes down when you need it like nicotine.                                           Dionysus Crafted his accounts while most Garnered his spiels with Snide.                               As they witnessed dream remembrance; he thought his memory was Presumably accurate, and although his tales were triFling to the gathering audience, they became his Heliocentric history.             Calling me a young Galleon and handing me a map, Grandpa scanned his hand across the vast land        guaranteeing trEasure would be found if I had no resignation.                This Asinine assertion to my teenage sister Symbolized the Barring of her unheeding imagination by time and then a smile parachuted down just when she needed it like nicotine. _TRF
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If it didn't harm anyone, I'd ask him for a new one. I'd pack light and disappear. If it meant I never had to hear the voices in my head that tell me to leave *every single day* I'd be ready in fifteen minutes.
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May 28, 2014
May 28, 2014 at 8:14 AM UTC
Better Call Saul
I'm not just Walt But Jesse too We wear our scars as badges Like Valhalla's fungi we bruise baby blue
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Sep 26, 2019
Sep 26, 2019 at 9:25 PM UTC
Breaking Bad