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" A THOUGHT WITHIN A THOUGHT WITHIN A THOUGHT" I remembered the other day while staring out of a car window looking west that i couldn't see up close. I guess its like a thing i have eye doctors say is either near sighted or far sighted. anyway I thought it could be quite the metaphor like how i kinda cant see what i have till its gone or maybe it connects with art an perspective like its really all where you stand or position yourself I mean, how can you really think you get a thing or painting if you will and feel confident enough to slap a label on it predefining everything it is or could be until you see it from all angles. *Then when i took that thought and made it abstract I found myself in new angles that i didnt even know existed often enough to know that in myself i lack to say I get. *I think the beauty is in the undefinable, unbelievable maybe let it be unknown. Dazzled in catching yourself in sudden observation the kind where you're not sure how long you could have been zoned out suddenly realizing whats in front of you. *out a window facing west a view my view narrows in tunnel vision on the rearview mirror reminding me of what i cant see objects in mirror are closer than they appear and i got to thinkin if I were to have labeled that rearview mirror or any maybe all rearview mirrors including metaphorical ones It woulda probably went along the lines of something **step outside yourself and meet at a coffee shop I wish you luck** _ _ for the more cynical sailor mouthed_ _
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Oct 24, 2015
Oct 24, 2015 at 8:21 PM UTC
its as if i threw up alphabet spaghettiOs- word *****
" A THOUGHT WITHIN A THOUGHT WITHIN A THOUGHT" I remembered the other day while staring out of a car window looking west that i couldn't see up close. I guess its like a thing i have eye doctors say is either near sighted or far sighted. anyway I thought it could be quite the metaphor like how i kinda cant see what i have till its gone or maybe it connects with art an perspective like its really all where you stand or position yourself I mean, how can you really think you get a thing or painting if you will and feel confident enough to slap a label on it predefining everything it is or could be until you see it from all angles. *Then when i took that thought and made it abstract I found myself in new angles that i didnt even know existed often enough to know that in myself i lack to say I get. *I think the beauty is in the undefinable, unbelievable maybe let it be unknown. Dazzled in catching yourself in sudden observation the kind where you're not sure how long you could have been zoned out suddenly realizing whats in front of you. *out a window facing west a view my view narrows in tunnel vision on the rearview mirror reminding me of what i cant see objects in mirror are closer than they appear and i got to thinkin if I were to have labeled that rearview mirror or any maybe all rearview mirrors including metaphorical ones It woulda probably went along the lines of something **step outside yourself and meet at a coffee shop I wish you luck** _ _ for the more cynical sailor mouthed_ _
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my mind is wheeling my thoughts are peeling my brain is creaking my synapses are snapping my feelings are fleeting my reality is reeling ...so nothing is really as it seems i insist, to ponder this, all in tonight's dreams...
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Sep 17, 2014
Sep 17, 2014 at 1:48 PM UTC
keep up