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#bathsheba
I pledge allegiance to all the stones in the road that have given me succor, to every poet-of-anywhere who greets me with wetted, parted lips and open heart, who greets the sun-rays shared, inching, opening o'er my yet living, praying body, reminding me that I am alive, that I am warm that I feel poetry in, on, cells, all over, deep in my extremities Most  importantly, in my busted heart, where warmth is stored in a soul restored, and Life affirmed, For who knows how many more times I will know this, How many more times I will able compose this, Play "measure the future'' in seconds or years and grimaced smiles over tears, or just one or the other, that be willed to supersede; Will keep you posted in every realized and many some stillborn poem, rising with the grand entrance of morn skies, or perhaps, lies buried neath in each horizon's cemetarial, and even those, that straddle a confusing and confused moon, of a twenty fours hours existence, be shoulder-borne, bathed in combinatorial equatorial moon & sun light, so we can bathe, like Bathsheba (1) by both, and delight at the exact same moment's portent, no matter, the disregarded, discarded, why we are who we are when pledge and plead allegiance to those eyes that read our scrivenings nml
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Aug 27, 2025
Aug 27, 2025 at 11:57 AM UTC
I pledge Allegiance
Glimpsing her bathing on the roof, He averted his eyes and looked away. Wondering if his eyes remembered her beauty correctly, He sneakily took a short glance to see clearly. And that was all it took for King David, Who gazed upon the wife of his own soldier. Lured by a glimpse, Hooked by a glance, Swallowed by a gaze, He didn't know the steep cost to be paid.
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Apr 16, 2016
Apr 16, 2016 at 4:28 PM UTC
Glimpse Glance Gaze
The Elders took me to church and planted me on the back row to squirm and fidget while they filled my head with stories of women like Delilah, who seduced Sampson and used her body to weaken a warrior, and Bathsheba, whose nakedness upon her own roof made David falter from king to killer, but told me that I will lose value after I grant a man permission–should he even ask– to lay his hands on me, as if the priest and prosecutor could preach purity into my dry bones and watch me rise up before them without ever having realized the power I possess within my own rib cage. *"And the serpent said unto the woman, 'You will surely not die."*
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Apr 11, 2016
Apr 11, 2016 at 1:24 PM UTC
Genesis 3:4
Years later Bathsheba's psychiatrist Was analysing the tryst Between King David And her. It was no tryst Said she. What a slur. He was a ****** And an opportunist. An amoeba would concur Said the psychiatrist That a shower screen And being more demure Would have been Quite spiritually enterprising. You cannot expect Kind David to desist From objectifying your femurs And a cracking pair of amethysts. Don't treat me Like some calculating Hormone Exchange Unit You sexist misogynist. You are not fit To analyse me. You say your name's Freud But you're wholly devoid Of any insight Of what is amiss Or my troubles might be. Not one piece of grit Have you put in my oyster. You obsequious churl I'm a girl you don't mess with. I could have you hung. But instead she dismissed him and booked an appointment With a certain professor Who went by the name of Carl Gustav Jung.
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May 23, 2014
May 23, 2014 at 11:27 AM UTC
Bathsheba's Psychiatrists