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Go sit outside in the sun, Auntie said, don't be stuck inside on a day like this. So I went outside and sat on the black iron steps leading down the stairs from the balcony. Dancer Auntie's dog sat beside me his chin on my shoulder wetting my shirt. The parade grounds were on my right, sergeants were barking orders to soldiers marching below. I stared at them: heads turned, arms straight as irons. Then Elsie, Auntie's friend's daughter, came up the stairs, one foot at a time, her small hand gripping the black iron rail coming up. I watched her stepping towards me, her head downwards. Dancer growled; hush, I said, raising a finger. He groaned, watching as the girl paused. She looked at me: why is he here? She said, pointing at the dog. He's protecting me, I said. From me? She said. Guess so, I said. Send him away, she said. Dancer groaned; go lie down Dancer, I said. He got up and walked along the black iron balcony, and sat by the back door. Elsie eyed me, then walked up the remaining steps: Mum said I had come play with you, Elsie said, looking down at me as I sat. Do you want to? I said. If I have to, she said, sitting down beside me on the step. If I don't I'll get a slap, she added, looking at me. What you want to play? I asked. She looked out at the soldiers marching below: what is there to play? Have you dolls? No no dolls, I replied, we can ball if you like. She pulled a face: boring ball games, she said. I can get one of my toy guns and we can play cowboys and cowgirls, I said. Boring boys' game, she replied. What do you want to play? I asked. We could play hide and seek, she said, you hide and I won't seek you. I looked at her 5 year old face with my 4 year old eyes. Let's ask Auntie for some milk and biscuit, I said, and listen to the radio. She nodded her head and we got up and she said: let's go.
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Sep 20, 2016
Sep 20, 2016 at 3:24 PM UTC
LET'S GO 1951.
Go sit outside in the sun, Auntie said, don't be stuck inside on a day like this. So I went outside and sat on the black iron steps leading down the stairs from the balcony. Dancer Auntie's dog sat beside me his chin on my shoulder wetting my shirt. The parade grounds were on my right, sergeants were barking orders to soldiers marching below. I stared at them: heads turned, arms straight as irons. Then Elsie, Auntie's friend's daughter, came up the stairs, one foot at a time, her small hand gripping the black iron rail coming up. I watched her stepping towards me, her head downwards. Dancer growled; hush, I said, raising a finger. He groaned, watching as the girl paused. She looked at me: why is he here? She said, pointing at the dog. He's protecting me, I said. From me? She said. Guess so, I said. Send him away, she said. Dancer groaned; go lie down Dancer, I said. He got up and walked along the black iron balcony, and sat by the back door. Elsie eyed me, then walked up the remaining steps: Mum said I had come play with you, Elsie said, looking down at me as I sat. Do you want to? I said. If I have to, she said, sitting down beside me on the step. If I don't I'll get a slap, she added, looking at me. What you want to play? I asked. She looked out at the soldiers marching below: what is there to play? Have you dolls? No no dolls, I replied, we can ball if you like. She pulled a face: boring ball games, she said. I can get one of my toy guns and we can play cowboys and cowgirls, I said. Boring boys' game, she replied. What do you want to play? I asked. We could play hide and seek, she said, you hide and I won't seek you. I looked at her 5 year old face with my 4 year old eyes. Let's ask Auntie for some milk and biscuit, I said, and listen to the radio. She nodded her head and we got up and she said: let's go.
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In this age when bullying is such an item of concern I cannot help smiling whenever I recall my youth as a boy soldier; then it (bullying) was practiced as an art form, encouraged (I’m sure) by authority for its “character building aspects”. Thus: When I was in the Army, well, that's Apprentice school, Inspecting one's belongings, early morning seemed the rule. And many hours spent beezing boots and ironing, folding, kit. Taught me to carry on with smile and hate it every bit. One had to lay one's kit on bed, and sleep by there on floor To survive next morning's panicked fright begun by crashing door, And that prancing A/T noncom., his ego, bully led, Who would burst his way into our World and yell 'Stand by your bed'. Then we'd all leap to attention, crumpled, ruffled hair. And our eyes they'd be unseeing though we each knew he was there, Looking straight ahead, just hoping, as he poked among our stuff, As he picked up polished boots, that he wouldn't be too rough, And hurl them through the window or against the fire door, That he wouldn't scrape his own boot studs along our polished floor. Of course, these hopes, these dreams of ours, were just pies in the sky. As well to hope or dream like that, well, pigs might even fly. Now he's checking button stick, and laces properly square And the cardboard frame inside your shirt, the one you never wear. The plimsoles stiffly black which you've polished shiny bright. The dimensions of your bed block; that counterpane's real tight. And its corners, every corner, must be folded tight to bed. If it's not, you'll spend a morning drilling hard outside with Fred. And now, today, I marvel that our masters thought it right To let this sneering, snarling, youth on us vent all this spite. But the proven test of character when all is said and done Was despite the gruelling life we led, we jeeps, we still had fun. And my particular little joy, the butter on my bread Was thinking, when outside of School, I'm going to smash his head. Some others might have thought the same not that it really matters, For though I don't recall his name, his memory lies in tatters. And after all, recalling life, those patterns on the quilt, Can we be sure that what we write is free of any guilt?
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Aug 6, 2025
Aug 6, 2025 at 5:28 PM UTC
Early Mornings - The Apprentice School
In this age when bullying is such an item of concern I cannot help smiling whenever I recall my youth as a boy soldier; then it (bullying) was practiced as an art form, encouraged (I’m sure) by authority for its “character building aspects”. Thus: When I was in the Army, well, that's Apprentice school, Inspecting one's belongings, early morning seemed the rule. And many hours spent beezing boots and ironing, folding, kit. Taught me to carry on with smile and hate it every bit. One had to lay one's kit on bed, and sleep by there on floor To survive next morning's panicked fright begun by crashing door, And that prancing A/T noncom., his ego, bully led, Who would burst his way into our World and yell 'Stand by your bed'. Then we'd all leap to attention, crumpled, ruffled hair. And our eyes they'd be unseeing though we each knew he was there, Looking straight ahead, just hoping, as he poked among our stuff, As he picked up polished boots, that he wouldn't be too rough, And hurl them through the window or against the fire door, That he wouldn't scrape his own boot studs along our polished floor. Of course, these hopes, these dreams of ours, were just pies in the sky. As well to hope or dream like that, well, pigs might even fly. Now he's checking button stick, and laces properly square And the cardboard frame inside your shirt, the one you never wear. The plimsoles stiffly black which you've polished shiny bright. The dimensions of your bed block; that counterpane's real tight. And its corners, every corner, must be folded tight to bed. If it's not, you'll spend a morning drilling hard outside with Fred. And now, today, I marvel that our masters thought it right To let this sneering, snarling, youth on us vent all this spite. But the proven test of character when all is said and done Was despite the gruelling life we led, we jeeps, we still had fun. And my particular little joy, the butter on my bread Was thinking, when outside of School, I'm going to smash his head. Some others might have thought the same not that it really matters, For though I don't recall his name, his memory lies in tatters. And after all, recalling life, those patterns on the quilt, Can we be sure that what we write is free of any guilt?
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