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#baggage
i adjust the strap of my bag to even the weight on each shoulder ignoring the rest of the weight that cripples me not just physically my stomach aches tongue’s tied body shakes brain fried voice breaks even though i tried to speak what’s in my mind but just mumbles escape i gulp and take a deep breath as i feel the blood being pumped and moving throughout my being trying to utilize the minimal strength left didn’t know how bad it would get not surprising from clueless ol’ me as fate prevails ruthlessly
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Feb 28
Feb 28, 2026 at 2:13 PM UTC
crippling weight
put on repeat a harvest in time eternity knocks we open the door no time for goodbye changed in a blink blink of an eye and we be gone.
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Jan 30
Jan 30, 2026 at 9:09 AM UTC
no time for goodbye
what's it like holding the weight of the world on your shoulders sure you've seen a horizon or two but are those even really your hands?
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Oct 15, 2025
Oct 15, 2025 at 11:32 AM UTC
heavy
If I weren't me, who would I be? If the world hadn't shut down, would I still be lost? Like blisters on my feet, I carry my doubts, Mistook burnout for discipline, wore it as a badge. Baggage heavy with memories, I drag it through the mud- Versions of myself, deeply buried in a suitcase. If I stop and leave it behind, Will the old me burn in ashes?
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May 27, 2025
May 27, 2025 at 1:34 PM UTC
10,000 Steps from my old self
Mr. Bag Man, Let go of your rucksack. There’s only one carryon the bus will let you carry on, Those bags will only slow you down, My hand is here to pull you out, Of the hurts from the past that haunt you. Bag man, You’ll hurt your back like that, Dragging all those bags behind you. Pack light. They’ll only get in your way, And make moving harder for you. Mr. Bag man, All you need is you. Let me guide you to, The new place designed for you. Those bags will crowd you space. Let go of them at a pace that works for you. Mr. Bag Man, Let go of those bags, You’ll miss your bus like that. If you can’t hurry up, She’ll leave you at this stop, with your stuff, And you can’t miss this bus, Another won’t wait for you. It’ll be hard. The past can hurt too much, But let her love guide you. Mr. Bag Man, Let it go, All you need is you, And her love, In this new place she’ll take you.
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May 25, 2025
May 25, 2025 at 11:52 AM UTC
Mr. Bag Man
echoes of guilt cause an avalanche of sorrow; we’re buried alive.
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Mar 9, 2025
Mar 9, 2025 at 7:24 AM UTC
avalanche of sorrow
As I stood there, cleaning my closet, In the middle of a bunch of lovely trinkets— I realised, I had baggage. A lot of it. It wasn’t just stuff. It wasn’t just an old sweater, —It was the smell of him. And perhaps the lovely necklace that reminded me of school— Or the cutest folded letter I forgot Someone gave me, years ago.. How could I let go? But it was moving day. Boxes weren’t that large to fit everything. I had to choose. Which ones would stay..                And which….                                                            I had to let go.
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Jan 16, 2025
Jan 16, 2025 at 3:13 AM UTC
Moving day
Your self sabotage is a transient orchestration in soft pursuit of a potent vexation, juggling vices as a decade old one trick pony circling pastures to meet itself in the middle of an argument; You’ll dawdle in the toy aisle, linger in the doorway, and parse the wounds of a family member standing afield; It could end when you let it, yet the turmoils have you rattled like a baby shower gift presented in glass, refracting sandy memories that turned to pleas by a roadside marquee; Lone hotel escapades with uncertainties set sights on useful youthful hastenings brigaded into shoe boxes, skipped lunches, and a forgotten birthday and ripple harm into a harmful world while we reel at the second hand trauma which announces your presence; The countless open-minded scars that set you apart can consume all but echoes, reminiscent of muddy punk tunes appearing out of thick air and plucked with the vengeance of a forsaken child who never had enough candles to blow out, who conceded happiness to pollinate fall out, who branched into nothing to escape burn out and who stitched longings into trials that all end with the conviction of a jealous ghost
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Jan 14, 2025
Jan 14, 2025 at 12:12 AM UTC
Predestined Indiscretions
Forget the book and candle. The creaking comes with age. You know those rattling panes are taunted by branches left uncut by you in lazy summer. Do not lock the door and run. Ghosts are particular. Always with us, they thrive in three-ply boxes, and in packed suitcases. When you are ready, they are too. Tony Noon
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Jan 11, 2025
Jan 11, 2025 at 4:09 PM UTC
Particular Ghosts
In my beginning some thing created this purposeless mess that stands before you Knowing my best would never be enough and still pushed me through like some kind of fuuck you To who? To the future me, to the tragedy I'd become ultimately? That's a ridiculously high baggage fee Especially for baggage bestowed upon me If there's nothing he can't do then none of this is how it had to be But nooooo, He had to go and put in that god ****** fruit tree ©2024
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Apr 17, 2024
Apr 17, 2024 at 4:16 PM UTC
~•§•~ The Beginning of the End: The Genesis of a Downfall ~•§•~
I should probably introduce myself My name is Anyone Else It'd be more than obvious to state I'm a mess Even though I do try my best Well, maybe not every time But I toe the line I'm not sure it's the right one Can't know that 'till my times done Attempted some revision to the predestined Tried to storyboard my own end Frankly, I couldn't manage My baggages baggage had to much baggage Overwhelmed seamlessly flipped to defeated A weak will finally and now fully depleted Note beforehand, this is beyond making a statement My name is actually, probably, most likely, irrelevant Knowing me will only be watching me come and go That's best case scenario ©2024
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Mar 10, 2024
Mar 10, 2024 at 5:57 PM UTC
~•§•~ Well Hello There ~•§•~
I wanted you to know Not from anger or spite Just a sort of insight A slight glimpse into My shadowed side But I'm afraid you can't hold They are really harsh, crude and snide I never would lie to you But you'd cry if you knew What life has been like From my point of view The hurt the fear I never would lie to you But you'd cry if you knew What life has been like From my point of view The hurt the fear The past that's so near Memories so clear They felt like yesterday It seems never ending no matter how I pray I struggle, I fall, I stand again. There's just no end to how much I've got to pay You say, you're sorry Misunderstood me; But no, seriously It's not your fault truly. I wanted to change For the better, if only It's just too late I'm doomed That's my fate
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Dec 5, 2018
Dec 5, 2018 at 12:48 AM UTC
Shadows
Let **** go, You can't see the world If you're carrying it on your shoulders
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Aug 7, 2023
Aug 7, 2023 at 11:37 PM UTC
Let it go
My arm is called the epic list Displaying the anthems of my life One by one I've lived these moments Heard the music loud and clear These melodies will forever live In the basement of my brain Falling into the depth of my mind I dig it up with my hand Revealing the traffic I'm addicted to the melancholy No matter where I travel We all carry a bag I've lived these moments Heard the music loud and clear These melodies will forever live In the basement of my brain -AJT
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Mar 13, 2023
Mar 13, 2023 at 9:34 PM UTC
Basement of My Brain
My blessing came in a designer gift wrap - Karma. The box made of Rejection. filler sheets of many colors.. ..Deceit …Embarrassment …..Betrayal ……Jealousy layered on top of some crumpled shreds of Self-doubt and Insecurity. — had to tear through some things to get to the goods — The best present I’ve ever gotten - a whole new Heart; with me forever to stay. Solace in knowing all the junk that came before Her, I get to throw away.
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Nov 6, 2021
Nov 6, 2021 at 7:21 AM UTC
The Gift.
i live here on the bedrock tunnel vision it’s difficult to see sometimes it’s just grey there used to be easier ways to get out before i became baggage left behind, raided and rotting a shell of what used to be there
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Jul 31, 2021
Jul 31, 2021 at 6:47 PM UTC
flight 182
you turn to me but i'm not there i'm drowning i told you but you couldn't listen the thoughts won't make sense none are clear they're surrounding encompassing and unnerving if i take one last breath would you notice the body folded neatly lying under the baggage you placed on my back i can no longer support myself but you won't take the load stuck inside your head and i'm stuck with you if i stop speaking i'll stop breathing so i'll carry on until my fingers are shaking too much from lack of oxygen or sometimes too much i can hear my breathing speeding up faster ready to take off and fly away with what's left of my soul and spirit that you didn't crush still going as i recognise the dizzy daze i'm falling into waiting to collapse in on myself for maybe the last time for a while at least we both know it won't happen because of you i couldn't however much you argue and scream and shout or maybe it's because of her calming my mind ok i have to stop now i told you it would get too much once again i say i'm sorry remember me or the old me if you can it wasn't your fault
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May 7, 2021
May 7, 2021 at 5:16 AM UTC
leave
Its is long overdue We have already wasted enough time We have carried this weight, these baggage and so much emotional turmoil, for too long, it blinds us and hinders us Making us uncomfortable, unacceptable, unable to grow, unable to see what needs to be removed from our lives and unable to overcome obstacles But I am too afraid.... No, we are afraid to remove such a blindfold and such a hindrance It seem almost impossible Because these are things that I.... No, these are the things we treasurer the most.
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Apr 11, 2021
Apr 11, 2021 at 11:46 AM UTC
Untitled
Hindsight, hallowed be thy name. All I've got is luggage... luggage! My God! Turn around; find my comrades slumped under the weights strapped to their spine! Limping, bearing, burdened by non-negotiables while the High Court of Good Karma takes collective sabbatical — and this knapsack of shame, I've partial credit in filling. Grey handkerchief, original sin: one. single. suckerpunch. and my fists are raised forever, begging for the chance to swing and prove my own strength — supposing the opportunity never fell into my lap — I'd said **** it," packed a hundred grams of bushy brushed-out curls, stop-sign red fifty grams of lips to match (uniform too, now I think about it) fifty grams of raccoon eyelids and coloured-in brows hundred grams of halls of mirrors, circus-attraction Alice lose a hundred/gain a hundred/repeat til dizzy hundred grams of sucked-in stomach, eyes averted in changing rooms wigs by the armful — that's three — nom-de-plumes thrown in gratis (it's only a journey to the rest of my life anyway, I'll need them, alternative being cinematic debut as Myself) hundred performances to imaginary audiences, less-than-stellar reviews hundred grams of overwhelming then underwhelming "on purpose" hundred grams of laughing off any belief in potential hundred grams of scratch-marks and verbal fountains of venom hundred grams of giving almostneverquite as good as I got hundred grams of group-work alone thank **** hundred biro-holes stabbed in martyred pencil cases feral in broad daylight spoiling for a fight kilo of aiming for 'scary' and landing on 'strange' kilo of being third to make good company a crowd kilo of taking sixteen years to find Her — Shadowboxer Fiona, rhythms invisible, catharsis in art — hundred doodled superstitious evil-eyes in the ruled margins hundred laments over the inability to provide a better future (removed one by one whenever I think the future's mutable) that one glimpse of white lightning in a violet storm one single minute's pause to look over my shoulder scarce-to-zero progress made endless miles to go breathless body soaked to the bone and this useless! ******* bag! of Everything and nothing of value!! mansions worth of loathing yet there's nothing to lose did I decide that because I can't change the world, I can change nothing at all (instead throwing darts at reflections/emotional vomit/kicking stray dogs as a full-time hobby)? O clarity so saccharine that I cannot be angered by the wasted years only because THERE ARE MORE TO COME I take it    off my shoulder, the first kind action I have spared myself in time unguessable empty      the         contents...    really     air it out... and trudge on     unaccompanied. The world's enough of an uphill climb.
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Jan 18, 2021
Jan 18, 2021 at 5:47 PM UTC
On Bolt-Cutters & Shame
Hindsight, hallowed be thy name. All I've got is luggage... luggage! My God! Turn around; find my comrades slumped under the weights strapped to their spine! Limping, bearing, burdened by non-negotiables while the High Court of Good Karma takes collective sabbatical — and this knapsack of shame, I've partial credit in filling. Grey handkerchief, original sin: one. single. suckerpunch. and my fists are raised forever, begging for the chance to swing and prove my own strength — supposing the opportunity never fell into my lap — I'd said **** it," packed a hundred grams of bushy brushed-out curls, stop-sign red fifty grams of lips to match (uniform too, now I think about it) fifty grams of raccoon eyelids and coloured-in brows hundred grams of halls of mirrors, circus-attraction Alice lose a hundred/gain a hundred/repeat til dizzy hundred grams of sucked-in stomach, eyes averted in changing rooms wigs by the armful — that's three — nom-de-plumes thrown in gratis (it's only a journey to the rest of my life anyway, I'll need them, alternative being cinematic debut as Myself) hundred performances to imaginary audiences, less-than-stellar reviews hundred grams of overwhelming then underwhelming "on purpose" hundred grams of laughing off any belief in potential hundred grams of scratch-marks and verbal fountains of venom hundred grams of giving almostneverquite as good as I got hundred grams of group-work alone thank **** hundred biro-holes stabbed in martyred pencil cases feral in broad daylight spoiling for a fight kilo of aiming for 'scary' and landing on 'strange' kilo of being third to make good company a crowd kilo of taking sixteen years to find Her — Shadowboxer Fiona, rhythms invisible, catharsis in art — hundred doodled superstitious evil-eyes in the ruled margins hundred laments over the inability to provide a better future (removed one by one whenever I think the future's mutable) that one glimpse of white lightning in a violet storm one single minute's pause to look over my shoulder scarce-to-zero progress made endless miles to go breathless body soaked to the bone and this useless! ******* bag! of Everything and nothing of value!! mansions worth of loathing yet there's nothing to lose did I decide that because I can't change the world, I can change nothing at all (instead throwing darts at reflections/emotional vomit/kicking stray dogs as a full-time hobby)? O clarity so saccharine that I cannot be angered by the wasted years only because THERE ARE MORE TO COME I take it    off my shoulder, the first kind action I have spared myself in time unguessable empty      the         contents...    really     air it out... and trudge on     unaccompanied. The world's enough of an uphill climb.
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stop carrying the baggage of the past to an unwritten future 6:31 PM 8/10/20
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Oct 8, 2020
Oct 8, 2020 at 3:32 AM UTC
Haiku
We met many many years back When the realisation hit that I may need you I met you at home and the street but as a vision When my mum constantly reminded me to get you home I rebelled and didn’t want to I met you in my tears When someone wanted you More than me, I met you in disdain When I saw many who had you But strutted around in false pride. And I didn’t want you. And here you are, Many moons later, Wherein I rediscovered you. It was never you, it was the picture I painted. I am getting closer to you now Fresh canvas, Wispy and comforting, Uplifting like a kite 🪁 in the sky, You’re blooming, You smell fresh as a 🌹. You’re “getting lighter”, And to me now it is not my weight in body, But the heaviness in my heart and mind, That I am getting lighter with. And as I do, I find you so comforting, You were always my friend, I didn’t see you As people and my heaviness painted you as an enemy, You’re my angel And I know you better, Getting closer to you, Whispy, floating and free. I like you lightness, You’re me now. You so want to come closer to me, Constantly trying to invade my mind, Tentacle my thoughts and dreams. But hey I get you, I am going to set you free. Because now you’re inside of me And my journey in the here and now is to be. You’re sweet and I get you, But sweetness is one flavour, And I like it spicy and tangy as well, A tad bitter, some more there, So I’ll just set you free. Now, I am free, Whispy and floating, Pink and sparkly, Becoming me...
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Sep 9, 2020
Sep 9, 2020 at 12:25 PM UTC
Getting Lighter
We met many many years back When the realisation hit that I may need you I met you at home and the street but as a vision When my mum constantly reminded me to get you home I rebelled and didn’t want to I met you in my tears When someone wanted you More than me, I met you in disdain When I saw many who had you But strutted around in false pride. And I didn’t want you. And here you are, Many moons later, Wherein I rediscovered you. It was never you, it was the picture I painted. I am getting closer to you now Fresh canvas, Wispy and comforting, Uplifting like a kite 🪁 in the sky, You’re blooming, You smell fresh as a 🌹. You’re “getting lighter”, And to me now it is not my weight in body, But the heaviness in my heart and mind, That I am getting lighter with. And as I do, I find you so comforting, You were always my friend, I didn’t see you As people and my heaviness painted you as an enemy, You’re my angel And I know you better, Getting closer to you, Whispy, floating and free. I like you lightness, You’re me now. You so want to come closer to me, Constantly trying to invade my mind, Tentacle my thoughts and dreams. But hey I get you, I am going to set you free. Because now you’re inside of me And my journey in the here and now is to be. You’re sweet and I get you, But sweetness is one flavour, And I like it spicy and tangy as well, A tad bitter, some more there, So I’ll just set you free. Now, I am free, Whispy and floating, Pink and sparkly, Becoming me...
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