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This talk of high noon, Will it go away soon? My, the talk on the moon, See, it appears through your loom. The colorful enigma Full of mud a lot stigma I’d say you should rid ya’ But I know you won’t bid, ha! The picture bare comes out While the ground dirt shouts As the woman's ashes sprout Do you get what it's really m‘bout? Secluded to the bathtub and pills The green dotted spaceman n’ thrills And military uniform drills Sure, most ain’t betting on those bills. I’d say, “sure now I get it, this play here I mean.” But seldom I let a thought flow a stream And lies of smarts make me feel unclean I’d rather pretend how deeply I’ve seen Anderson writes like a fish out of water How I wish that the dashes he wrote found me a tad smarter In the yellowed remains of the playwrights a falter Outburst of beeping n’ buzzing still can’t halt ‘er He’d burn his hand on the reddening top The bigger question, why’d he not try and stop The overall story of the foggy gray plot I’d let myself in, but I’d know my teeth’ll just rot I real like color, I’d almost say I’d give it some love Instead of a royal, gray manning n’ shove If a riled up dove Saw the green up above Would it—nah, I think I know anyway.
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Jan 25
Jan 25, 2026 at 6:55 PM UTC
"Asteroid City"