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wielding the unseen wrapped tight in a forever moment
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Mar 4
Mar 4, 2026 at 6:14 AM UTC
setting words free
PartI: The Temple of Unseen Eyes (An Epic of Blind Faith and the Abyss Beneath Hope) Beneath the ash of fallen suns, where silent choirs pray, A city built on promises was born of pale decay. Its towers reached through rancid clouds—  white bones of gods defiled— Each stone was set by hands that swore  the Heavens reconciled. They carved the air with chants of gold,  with hymns that none could read, They crowned their doubts in velvet lies,  and called their madness creed. For hope was their cathedral’s spine,  and faith its rotting core, They’d kneel to drink illusion’s wine,  then beg for evermore. The priests were blind from birth by rite,  their sockets packed with sand, To “see through faith” they said, “is sight”—  and praised the trembling hand. They promised paradise in dust,  they sold their souls for fear, They kissed the flame that seared their trust,  and whispered, “He is near.” And when the sick cried out for help,  they smiled through teeth of rust, And told them, “Pain refines the soul—  in agony, you must.” Their altars dripped with unseen blood,  their psalms were screams disguised, And still they prayed for mercy’s flood—  as hope itself capsized. Then came the Hour of Hollow Light—  their faith’s grotesque reward, The sky split open, black and white,  and silence drew its sword. Their candles bled instead of burned,  their holy texts took flight, And every truth they thought they’d learned  collapsed into the night. Still—none would flee. Still—none would see. They bowed before the void’s decree. For hope, once pure, had turned to chain—  a shackle forged of sweetened pain. They sang their trust into the air,  they screamed their love to stone, They built a god that wasn’t there,  and called their echo throne. The heavens gave no sign, no sound,  no hand, no voice, no breath— And still they knelt on haunted ground  and worshipped only death. Their children’s eyes went white as glass,  their laughter turned to dust, Their future hung—a shadow mass—  devoured by their trust. The faith that promised endless dawn  bore midnight’s true design, And hope, that sweet delusion’s spawn,  uncoiled—serpentine. And when at last their city fell,  there were no screams, no flame, No vengeance from the pit of Hell,  no angel’s wing, no name. Just silence—vast, eternal, pure—  a stillness dense as stone. For what they’d prayed for to endure  had never once been known. The last blind priest, with trembling jaw,  rose to the crumbling spire, And whispered, “Faith is all I saw—”  then vanished in the mire. Now ruins sleep beneath the dust,  and nameless winds intone, Of those who trusted hope and trust,  and reaped what can’t be shown. No bones remain, no hymns, no cries,  no relics of belief— Only a pulse beneath the skies—  too slow to grant relief. Some say at night it still resounds,  a breath behind the moan, As if the void itself was proud  of what had made it known. Yet listen close—  and you may hear— A whisper soft, yet sharp with fear: “Faith was never blind…   It was watching.” PartII: The Prayer That Ate Itself (A Descent into the Black Mouth of Blind Faith and Hope) There was a church before the dawn—  no doors, no walls, no floor, Its hymns were carved in nameless bone,  its saints were war and war. No stars above to mark the sky,  no sun to crown the day, Yet still they prayed—  my god, they prayed— to something far away. They built their faith on hollow sound,  on echoes feeding echoes, A spiral of belief unwound,  and bound in burning meadows. Each vow was smoke, each truth a scar,  each dream a glass-eyed dove, They called the void “Our Father’s heart,”  and bled themselves for love. Hope was their sweetest poison,  distilled from fear and thirst, A mirror held to nothingness,  that whispered, “You were first.” And faith—oh faith—  it crawled like light  beneath the skin of lies, It promised warmth, but left them cold,  and blind behind their eyes. They preached of heaven’s quiet calm,  but silence took their tongues, They praised the balm of unseen hands—  till rot filled up their lungs. They marched in lines, the faithful dead,  their eyelids stitched with thread, Their prayers were all the words they said—  the words that left them dead. And when one dared to ask what for,  the others hissed and cried, “For doubt’s the gate that opens Hell,  and Hell is where you’d hide!” So all returned to worship’s trance,  their hearts like locks unturned, Their hope the fire that fed itself,  and left them never burned. A prophet rose—a hollow man,  his breath a ghost of sin, He said, “The god you seek is near—  he dwells beneath your skin.” They tore him down and drank his blood,  and called it sacred rain, They bathed in what they thought was grace,  but it was only pain. Then something deep began to hum,  a low, consuming drone, As if the faith they’d built so high  had found a voice—its own. And one by one, they bowed in awe,  their bodies still as glass, Their shadows turned, their eyes went wide,  and time refused to pass. No storm, no flame, no righteous sound—  just knowing filled the air. An unseen shape, too vast, too wrong,  began to form from prayer. It wasn’t wrath, nor mercy’s hand,  nor love’s forgiving call— It was the faith itself that lived,  and ate them, one and all. No scream escaped, no flesh was torn,  no mark was left to tell, But something smiled within the dark,  and wore their hope so well. For faith had fed upon belief,  and hope had turned to seed, And every root that sprouted forth  was watered with their need. And now, when silence cracks the night,  and shadows hum too near, You’ll hear a whisper not your own—  a name you’ve never feared. And should you kneel, and should you weep,  and whisper, “Are You there?” You’ll feel it smile behind your breath—  and move beneath your prayer. The light you seek was never gone. The dark you fear was never wrong. It listens still. It always did. Faith was the mouth— and hope, the lid. PartIII: When the Word Began to Pray (A Poem That Eats Its Own Voice) At first there was a mouth—  mine—  speaking of faith like fire, and it sounded holy, didn’t it?  Each word a rung to climb  toward meaning,  toward light—  toward something. The faithful came,  built pillars of sound around my tongue,  and believed the echo. I believed it too. We sang. We built belief out of breath. We worshipped the air between us. Then the words began to tremble.  The rhythm slipped.  The echo lagged. I said God—  but only heard od… od… od… The vowels wilted,  consonants split open,  bleeding static. Faith grew heavier.  Hope, hungrier. And the prayer—  oh, the prayer—  began to pray back. Walls of verse closed in,  lines folding on themselves. Meaning melted,  letters pooling like wax. I tried to say I believe,  but the I went missing.  Only believe remained,  and it sounded wrong,  like the hiss of something breathing  through my throat. Hope spoke next.  Not as comfort.  Not as light.  Just a shape in the dark  that said,  “More.” So I gave it more.  My rhythm.  My pulse.  My name. Each word devoured the next—  a serpent swallowing language. Silence learned to speak fluently. Soon I could not tell  if I was writing the prayer  or if the prayer was writing me. The page began to hum.  The ink—alive.  The words—breathing. The silence—listening. And then—  nothing was mine. Not the poem. Not the prayer. Not even the thought of ending. …you still reading? …still believing? It feeds on that. The stanzas crumble—  lines eaten by the dark between beats:   f    a     i      t       h         f           a               … (hush now—) There is no “I” here anymore. There is no end. There is only—   …listening. And when you finally close the page, you’ll feel a breath that isn’t yours— a pulse behind your eyes— and something gentle will whisper, so close you’ll doubt you heard it: “You kept reading. That was enough.”
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Nov 10, 2025
Nov 10, 2025 at 4:15 PM UTC
Blind Faith's Destruction (In Three Parts)
PartI: The Temple of Unseen Eyes (An Epic of Blind Faith and the Abyss Beneath Hope) Beneath the ash of fallen suns, where silent choirs pray, A city built on promises was born of pale decay. Its towers reached through rancid clouds—  white bones of gods defiled— Each stone was set by hands that swore  the Heavens reconciled. They carved the air with chants of gold,  with hymns that none could read, They crowned their doubts in velvet lies,  and called their madness creed. For hope was their cathedral’s spine,  and faith its rotting core, They’d kneel to drink illusion’s wine,  then beg for evermore. The priests were blind from birth by rite,  their sockets packed with sand, To “see through faith” they said, “is sight”—  and praised the trembling hand. They promised paradise in dust,  they sold their souls for fear, They kissed the flame that seared their trust,  and whispered, “He is near.” And when the sick cried out for help,  they smiled through teeth of rust, And told them, “Pain refines the soul—  in agony, you must.” Their altars dripped with unseen blood,  their psalms were screams disguised, And still they prayed for mercy’s flood—  as hope itself capsized. Then came the Hour of Hollow Light—  their faith’s grotesque reward, The sky split open, black and white,  and silence drew its sword. Their candles bled instead of burned,  their holy texts took flight, And every truth they thought they’d learned  collapsed into the night. Still—none would flee. Still—none would see. They bowed before the void’s decree. For hope, once pure, had turned to chain—  a shackle forged of sweetened pain. They sang their trust into the air,  they screamed their love to stone, They built a god that wasn’t there,  and called their echo throne. The heavens gave no sign, no sound,  no hand, no voice, no breath— And still they knelt on haunted ground  and worshipped only death. Their children’s eyes went white as glass,  their laughter turned to dust, Their future hung—a shadow mass—  devoured by their trust. The faith that promised endless dawn  bore midnight’s true design, And hope, that sweet delusion’s spawn,  uncoiled—serpentine. And when at last their city fell,  there were no screams, no flame, No vengeance from the pit of Hell,  no angel’s wing, no name. Just silence—vast, eternal, pure—  a stillness dense as stone. For what they’d prayed for to endure  had never once been known. The last blind priest, with trembling jaw,  rose to the crumbling spire, And whispered, “Faith is all I saw—”  then vanished in the mire. Now ruins sleep beneath the dust,  and nameless winds intone, Of those who trusted hope and trust,  and reaped what can’t be shown. No bones remain, no hymns, no cries,  no relics of belief— Only a pulse beneath the skies—  too slow to grant relief. Some say at night it still resounds,  a breath behind the moan, As if the void itself was proud  of what had made it known. Yet listen close—  and you may hear— A whisper soft, yet sharp with fear: “Faith was never blind…   It was watching.” PartII: The Prayer That Ate Itself (A Descent into the Black Mouth of Blind Faith and Hope) There was a church before the dawn—  no doors, no walls, no floor, Its hymns were carved in nameless bone,  its saints were war and war. No stars above to mark the sky,  no sun to crown the day, Yet still they prayed—  my god, they prayed— to something far away. They built their faith on hollow sound,  on echoes feeding echoes, A spiral of belief unwound,  and bound in burning meadows. Each vow was smoke, each truth a scar,  each dream a glass-eyed dove, They called the void “Our Father’s heart,”  and bled themselves for love. Hope was their sweetest poison,  distilled from fear and thirst, A mirror held to nothingness,  that whispered, “You were first.” And faith—oh faith—  it crawled like light  beneath the skin of lies, It promised warmth, but left them cold,  and blind behind their eyes. They preached of heaven’s quiet calm,  but silence took their tongues, They praised the balm of unseen hands—  till rot filled up their lungs. They marched in lines, the faithful dead,  their eyelids stitched with thread, Their prayers were all the words they said—  the words that left them dead. And when one dared to ask what for,  the others hissed and cried, “For doubt’s the gate that opens Hell,  and Hell is where you’d hide!” So all returned to worship’s trance,  their hearts like locks unturned, Their hope the fire that fed itself,  and left them never burned. A prophet rose—a hollow man,  his breath a ghost of sin, He said, “The god you seek is near—  he dwells beneath your skin.” They tore him down and drank his blood,  and called it sacred rain, They bathed in what they thought was grace,  but it was only pain. Then something deep began to hum,  a low, consuming drone, As if the faith they’d built so high  had found a voice—its own. And one by one, they bowed in awe,  their bodies still as glass, Their shadows turned, their eyes went wide,  and time refused to pass. No storm, no flame, no righteous sound—  just knowing filled the air. An unseen shape, too vast, too wrong,  began to form from prayer. It wasn’t wrath, nor mercy’s hand,  nor love’s forgiving call— It was the faith itself that lived,  and ate them, one and all. No scream escaped, no flesh was torn,  no mark was left to tell, But something smiled within the dark,  and wore their hope so well. For faith had fed upon belief,  and hope had turned to seed, And every root that sprouted forth  was watered with their need. And now, when silence cracks the night,  and shadows hum too near, You’ll hear a whisper not your own—  a name you’ve never feared. And should you kneel, and should you weep,  and whisper, “Are You there?” You’ll feel it smile behind your breath—  and move beneath your prayer. The light you seek was never gone. The dark you fear was never wrong. It listens still. It always did. Faith was the mouth— and hope, the lid. PartIII: When the Word Began to Pray (A Poem That Eats Its Own Voice) At first there was a mouth—  mine—  speaking of faith like fire, and it sounded holy, didn’t it?  Each word a rung to climb  toward meaning,  toward light—  toward something. The faithful came,  built pillars of sound around my tongue,  and believed the echo. I believed it too. We sang. We built belief out of breath. We worshipped the air between us. Then the words began to tremble.  The rhythm slipped.  The echo lagged. I said God—  but only heard od… od… od… The vowels wilted,  consonants split open,  bleeding static. Faith grew heavier.  Hope, hungrier. And the prayer—  oh, the prayer—  began to pray back. Walls of verse closed in,  lines folding on themselves. Meaning melted,  letters pooling like wax. I tried to say I believe,  but the I went missing.  Only believe remained,  and it sounded wrong,  like the hiss of something breathing  through my throat. Hope spoke next.  Not as comfort.  Not as light.  Just a shape in the dark  that said,  “More.” So I gave it more.  My rhythm.  My pulse.  My name. Each word devoured the next—  a serpent swallowing language. Silence learned to speak fluently. Soon I could not tell  if I was writing the prayer  or if the prayer was writing me. The page began to hum.  The ink—alive.  The words—breathing. The silence—listening. And then—  nothing was mine. Not the poem. Not the prayer. Not even the thought of ending. …you still reading? …still believing? It feeds on that. The stanzas crumble—  lines eaten by the dark between beats:   f    a     i      t       h         f           a               … (hush now—) There is no “I” here anymore. There is no end. There is only—   …listening. And when you finally close the page, you’ll feel a breath that isn’t yours— a pulse behind your eyes— and something gentle will whisper, so close you’ll doubt you heard it: “You kept reading. That was enough.”
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If there were a story asked, and the asker were as weary as me, I might ask the asker what good could a half told story be. The asker answers, well then, begin at the end, then we all rest easy, knowing it all works out.
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Jan 29, 2023
Jan 29, 2023 at 3:37 PM UTC
Bedtime story order
This is spoken word (that’s words aloud) freed from the screen sent out proud words finding voice sounds in word form finding new ears words outperformed When words stay inside they fester and blister they poison and kick sour and bitter it’s only out loud that’s words pass the test it’s when they’re outspoken they get off my chest This is spoken word loud words out-loud ready to be heard above the crowd
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Nov 14, 2022
Nov 14, 2022 at 3:09 PM UTC
Spoken Word
she always talks says and orders say something' you stood as a stunt coming from ancient saying no word she has gone crying with tears ascending as rains shouting at the crowds that is my fault they stretched thier lips as they do not know what you want? you screamed at them a mad man they called you believed that running so fast shouting at the space i love my darling reaching her home your sound is hardly heard when you reached there you could not even stood you screamed so loud but she could not hear as your sound was not so aloud you can't ever move but the waves blow against willingness she had another one whose word fly to heart no matter if he is honest no matter if he has trust '
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Dec 6, 2019
Dec 6, 2019 at 3:16 AM UTC
talk
On the sky, cloud’s write, The west wind reads it aloud: ‘Monsoon phantasy’!
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Jun 12, 2018
Jun 12, 2018 at 2:59 AM UTC
Monsoon phantasy
Here sits the poet The scribe of the times Rendering the wordless Into heart-rending rhymes. Listen to the poet Who says what most do not. Pay attention closely And see what the poet has got. Sometimes you listen, Then must listen once more, Because hidden inside Might be the words to a score. Only you don’t yet hear The music it is playing Because you are still listening To the words they are saying. And, sometimes you must While reading the second time Be careful not to penalize Because the words don’t rhyme. It is often about the cadence, The way the words dance along, That turns the words from prose To the beginnings of a song. The poet’s job is to treat you With a bit more than just language To give you all the artistry That the spoken word can manage. So we use things like spacing And often joyous syncopation To achieve your attention And catch your imagination. Whether in a limerick Or in a soothing lullaby We do our best to slip things Like satisfaction past your eyes. We are, after all, artists Who take what you have heard And use that to entice you To fall in love with the spoken word.
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Oct 31, 2015
Oct 31, 2015 at 12:02 AM UTC
THE POET
Write it down That thing You fantasize about. Write it down Those words you dare not Say aloud. Write it down Now is the right time to write When words will not sit tight When they cannot match Whatever you hold inside. Leave it all to feeling Will give these words meaning Write it down What silences your mind Exactly that Which makes your dear heart bounce. It is a wall to climb And one to knock down Write it all -- The words do not need to blend It is then When feelings make the most sense. Write it on paper My love, The one who will answer One who can read Lines that are not poetic.
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Jul 22, 2015
Jul 22, 2015 at 4:06 PM UTC
Write it down.
He weeps his heart, and hangs his head, He doubles back, and follows her back to bed, She says, " Some homes are towns and lives, while others wear their homes inside." And he keeps up though he's kept out, the volatile, the sudden frown. She makes up the cupcakes but they're never vegan are they? No they're never vegan are they? He makes a gift, and wrings his thumbs, the bubble bath, the tepid tub, Outside where the rains have gone long, something gives him something strong, And he picks up where he had left off, the trouble is he doesn't know when to back off, and the cupcakes aren't vegan, sweet and such spectacular, but they really aren't eaten, now that they've been made with eggs. No the cupcakes aren't vegan, though they are quite delicious. And he loves her forever, though he never eats again. No he never eats again. No he never eats again.
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May 2, 2014
May 2, 2014 at 3:02 PM UTC
The Cupcakes Aren't Vegan, At Least I Don't Think They Are