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the elegances of minutiae, the grandeur of detail ******** inspired by m vogel https://hellopoetry.com/poem/5097839/airborne-part-i/ &&&&&&& perhaps, unlikely, unwittingly your fingertips bring you to a familiarity, stumbling into a new door, taken by the intricate intrigue of any of: name, style, handwriting, overlapping language and sometimes pure chance, impure luck, leads one to a poem, that soddens your soul, the elegances of minutiae, the grandeur of detail, the rendering of pain so swelling in a heart, where loss is everything and then there is absence,   and though a life can be voided, a poem is forever, for it lives in a land of luck of the draw and you read this poem above, and you are airborne into a deeper sea depth that makes the chest arrest, the legs limp, the intensity of the details insist one clutches his neck to ascertain that the choking will not be permanent this falling into a poem bedevils me, and tells me the road ahead so open, so wide, scarcely touched by footsteps, and return you do for a second tasting, a third emulsion, and though you leave another's poem, the heaviness of chest informs yourself, this is now part of my baggage that cannot be be ever lost, but will go round and round the luggage carousel till it is your turn to take it home Sept. 23, 2025
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Oct 11, 2025
Oct 11, 2025 at 10:31 AM UTC
the elegances of minutiae, the grandeur of detail, on the now empty canvas
Airborne Muse #2: Once I wrote: (1) if it cannot be said in ten words, it cannot (but now, older wiser, more intuitive) I be~leave five is plentiful and I'm still                                         working on                                                                                  the three of: thee and me & and one day, I"ll get to maybe, and reveal a bare skin of brotherly love, and speak of the trinity of two; but I'm open to your suggestions,                                                                              re that too: note tho, must be superior superlative than: *above beyond                                               just merely we two* 11/26/24 12:27pm last updated 7:07am 9/28/25
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Sep 19, 2025
Sep 19, 2025 at 10:33 AM UTC
Reenvisioned: Airborne Muse #2: Once I wrote:
Up, up and away, as I soar into the sky, light as a feather, with the birds on high, Oh, watch me fly, as I spread my wings, Explore the world, and the most wonderful things, The beauty that's within, and all that it brings, Just look down, and see what the world has in store, as I am exploring, Who could ask for more, flying up above this whole entire nation, as I am Thankful for God's Beautiful Creations, as I look down upon the lands and the seas, The monuments, of the world, So beautiful to see, A marvelous sight, So adorning to me, as I am airborne, Flying in my Dreams!!!! B.R. Date: 4/15/2025
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Apr 15, 2025
Apr 15, 2025 at 2:07 PM UTC
Flying in my Dreams!!!!
Airborne Muse #2: Once I wrote: (1) if it cannot be said in ten words, it cannot (but now, older wiser, more intuitive) I believe five is plentiful 11/26/24 12:27pm
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Nov 27, 2024
Nov 27, 2024 at 1:13 PM UTC
Airborne Muse #2: Once I wrote:
At swim, girl waits with gun. She's a half-formed thing, having entered into it motherless. The fault in our stars, the night sky with exit wounds, is left to the grace of a god of such small things: fabulous disarray, perilous notions. It's a common tale in tragic literature, but here it now floats. The red tide washing back onto shore as granules of sugar, sweet as petrified honey in the hallowed out trees: in which we begin to not understand. The sea breaks its back, lingering like the wet gossamer of her nightdress, covered with the scent of stillbirth, and the illimitable shut-in trials: they arrive in waves, she weeps every time they're "borne."
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Apr 1, 2020
Apr 1, 2020 at 10:09 AM UTC
The Dead-Tossed Waves
The ocean spray of salt The everlasting sounds of waves The sand, a locked vault The tide, an unforgiving grave The sun rises at the edge The memories so celestial I take my loyal pledge My heart a sailing vessel Sea shells, colorful in sound Sea life, beautiful in sight A dream I’ve finally found The sunset, a hypnotizing light The airborne seagulls calling me to sink The surf alluring a magical peace My endeavors start to shrink The stars turn to be my timepiece
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Mar 3, 2018
Mar 3, 2018 at 4:48 PM UTC
Edge of Dawn
Put some stress on those legs Not a dress that begs My permission for takeoff
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Aug 23, 2017
Aug 23, 2017 at 4:40 PM UTC
Instructions From the Control Tower