#1w - Hello Poetry

While rolling, trolling, strolling Found a round astounding gem Pull one word like a cork in the gourd Could not accept a poem worth a foam I accept ten word poem structured in zen Even I tried the challenge for a change One word is so broad; meanings could not contain in a board How would the giver deliver the message to receiver? I got no humor and color for that poem Sorry but this is only my opinion; Don't bring onions Thank you for sharing and found something worth learning Assonance is worth trying.

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Jul 29, 2015

Jul 29, 2015 at 11:36 AM UTC

ArthurDKid

Too many words poem

While rolling, trolling, strolling Found a round astounding gem Pull one word like a cork in the gourd Could not accept a poem worth a foam I accept ten word poem structured in zen Even I tried the challenge for a change One word is so broad; meanings could not contain in a board How would the giver deliver the message to receiver? I got no humor and color for that poem Sorry but this is only my opinion; Don't bring onions Thank you for sharing and found something worth learning Assonance is worth trying.

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Nov 27, 2014

Nov 27, 2014 at 9:37 PM UTC