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Even if you love someone else
Please just notice me
Nothing hurts more than going unnoticed by someone you're emotionally attracted to.
Ouch! It hurts!
Alex Braun Aug 10
I want to be thought of as wild, feral, absolutely uncontrolled,
I want people to see me as barely restrained,
I want my hair to be an total mess and my smile to be a little unnerving,
I want my hands to be as soft as the sweetest moss but my fists as rough as the stones beneath,
I want to look like I've just climbed a tree or I'm about to dive into the ocean,
I wish to be perceived as thunderstorm, a maelstrom,
I am lost but not looking for a way home.
Isabella Aug 7
I left to wash my hands today
And rid myself of the sun’s cruel rays
I walked into the strongest waves
No one saw, so I couldn’t be saved

The water rose up from my knees
Until it began to fill my cheeks
Salt in my lungs, I couldn’t breathe
And by then at last my hands were clean
Maybe after that they’d notice me
ALL,
HELLO POETRY USERS...
EVERYONE FACES A POEM ON HELLO POETRY...

WHEN ANYONE WRITE A POEM
THAT IS NOT SEEN BY EVERYONE
DUE TO HIDE EXPLICIT SETTING
WHEN WE MAKE OUR ACCOUNT ON HELLO POETRY
THIS SETTING IS ON
DUE TO THIS EVERYONE NOT SEEN ALL POEMS

BUT, WHEN WE WILL OFF IT
THAN WE CAN SEE EVERYONE'S POEM
THAT'S A FAULT
AND I SEARCH THE REASON BEHIND IT
HIDE EXPLICIT SETTING

IF YOU WANT TO REMOVE SUCH PROBLEM
GO ON SETTING
THAN ADVANCE SETTING
AND  REMOVE THE TICK MARK
HIDE EXPLICIT WRITING

THANK YOU FOR READING.
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PLEASE SPREAD IT.
REPOST IT.

NOTICE...
EVERYONE MUST READ...
THANKS FOR READING...
ktle May 10
In a crowd of a thousand
You are the one
My eyes find first.

When the lights are dimmed
To me, you shine
No differently from a star

In the buzzing of a crowd
Your voice rings
And I turn to find you

And even when you're distracted
You make me stop and notice

But to you,
I'm just another face
Another dimmed out soul
Another voice
That adds to the buzzing

But I cant help but hope
That one day
When I'm not noticing
You'll look around
And search for me.
an old poem i wrote for my boyfriend when i first liked him three years ago :)
mae Apr 19
I've got a word
written all over me--
INVISIBLE
always unnoticed
always unseen
although I'm used to it
at times it bruises
like when the love
you wish you could have
just pass you by...
it is times like these
I wish I'm visible
Another day of one invisible girl.
Euphrosyne Mar 10
What do I have to do to get you to notice me?
Change my hair, the way I walk?
My clothes, the way I talk?
We've known each other for some time now,
Yet I'm still invisible to you.
My feelings run deep and how
I wish you only knew.
I see your face every time I close my eyes.
To me, you just seem so different from the other girls
To you, I'm just a friend,
Nothing more, nothing less.
I settle for friendship in the end
Even though it hurts like hell
Because I don't want to make a mess.
Instead, I'll keep my secret to myself
And take my pride back off the shelf.
Until one day you finally see
That you and I were meant to be.
I'll wait for now
Because sooner or later
maybe I'll be gone.
To let you be in your life
Because it looks like that you are happy without me
So when will you notice me?
Until when you won't notice me? Please at least one chance again please?
Acina Joy Feb 29
In the course of the world's creation,
I've seen you somewhere, or everywhere, all at once.  

You mapped the stars by my side, when I didn't know where they were or what they were named.

You told me about fascinating little things that walked and lived, and breathed, with such enthusiasm, I began to learn that they existed with such amazement.

You formed nonsense of words, so ridiculous, you  made me question the peak of human intelligence.

You showed me gestures so small, or words that required no enunciation, I learned how silence spoke louder than our words.

You taught me so much, that eventually, I knew the feeling inside of me that grew in my chest, I no longer needed your assistance to name such.

Somewhere, everywhere, all at once, you were in the course of the world's creation.

The moment I took notice, the world stopped revolving.

And in that moment, it was just you and I.
Jieun Feb 15
"promises are meant to be broken"
it is not meant to be broken
it has BEEN broken

it has been broken because you weren't honest
it has been broken, because you didn't cared
didn't care enough to fulfill it
don't you know how that's really unfair?

People make excuses for the promises they cant keep
so they decided to blame it on fate
when really, they're the ones who we have to hate

promises aren't meant to be broken
we aren't suppose to forget
because someone out there is waiting...is hoping for it...
so....




promises are meant to be kept...
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