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Oct 2014
Its Bad

It make Many people sad

it's dangerous

The only way you can make it if you're courageous


There are many people still getting killed

As you can see the struggle is still real

Many people don't care

Until the only choice  is to shed a tear

Many people are still not trying to change

It is really strange

The community is not better

So someone needs to write that change letter

The community is like hell

That nearly fell

The community is the most horrible place to be According to me

The community is competition and everyone want to win

But there is no changed men

And yet everyone has the nerves to complain

Instead of trying to maintain

Thats my expectation on my community

We would need some fluency

We would need someone who can encourage us

And may not fuss

We need a leader

So this community can be neater

We would need a better community basically

We would need people to take ownership for Their good deeds

We would need a power community

To build a better economy

We would  need powerful people

To make the community equal

The community did not grow

It exactly explode

It declined

Like everyone is so blind

And thats my expectation on the community in about 6 months - 3 years
Written by
tanayja thomas  brookyn
(brookyn)   
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