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Aug 2014
When you feel like there's no tomorrow,
You need to forget about all your sorrow.
You need to see the light,
Throughout your day and night.

For it is you who makes that decision,
But only on one condition.
If you truly want to go,
And feel like the world is a big no-no.

Tell me that you hated all the time we spent together,
That it was all a never.

Tell me.
You see,


You put me in the right,
When there's wasn't even a light.
You said that I need you,
And that you knew.

About the struggles I had to face,
And that I began to think life was race.
A race for who could finish it first,
Without the feeling of being the worst.

But you told me that it wasn't a race,
And that you had to **go at your own pace.
Hello please share.there is no paragraph order or structure to this,just a simple message. There may be some grammatical errors...sorry!
Feedback is needed ****** sure to comment and follow!
Also I have two other poems,
Be sure to check them out.
Thanks.
-Khizara
KZ
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KZ  Narnia
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