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Judgmental Disdain...Suck My Tailpipe!

Trade me...

lives...

Let me see

how ...'simple "

it is...

to persevere...

when you are

the scapegoat...

work mule...

invisible...

until

what you haven't done done

becomes noticed'

 

Trade me...

bodies...

navigate the world

from a distinctly

different

perspective...

the receiving end...

of the invisible 85%

who rarely

get a second glance...

Let alone

a golden chance.

 

Go ahead...

walk the tightrope...

with two left shoes...

stretch your tolerances...

but you're working without a net

and no

there are "volunteers"

falling all over themselves

just to

be the one ...

 

Don't bother

with your opinion

it is now

inconsequential.

 

As too...

are you.

 

I think

you'll find...

no seats saved;

no "extra" tickets;

your sentences will start

trailing off...

as you realize that

no one is listening.

 

I liken it

to the sounds of your car...

each sound

comforting and familiar...

you know exactly

how hard

you can push it....

 

...The same curves,

always handle differently,

in an unfamiliar

downgraded vehicle.

 

So to,

go our lives....

becoming callused

and indifferent

to the cars of others...

unless of coarse...

beep, BEEP.....VAROOM!!!!!

pretty...

Shiny....

RED!

 

Perhaps instead...

admiring ...

noticing...

appreciating...

 

There is

tremendous beauty

in watching a pro

surf the serendipitous waves...

all the while...

being charming, witty,

purposeful...

but most of all

unaided...

A gleeful grace

 

effortless...

 

Perhaps

one day....

my demolition derby

of a life...

will allow

the crossing of our paths.

And if

you still maintain

that smug

judgmental disdain

you seem

to be so proud of...

I will drop this *****

into 5th gear...

and you my pretty...

can **** my tailpipe!

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Written by
suzanne-penn
American
Published
Jul 2, 2014
Lines·Words
101·266
Notes

There will be some who will no appreciate this piece...

Honestly, I didn't write it for them...

I wrote it for all of those

who have struggled

through all the Judgmental Disdain

of the other 15%

who feel as though

anyone could

because they did

...

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