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Jun 2014
"I leave my heart open but it stays empty for days"

I feel an emptiness in my chest
I feel the loneliness
The sadness
I can feel my heart's desire to be loved
I can feel its fear of hurting again
I feel the pain
The plead for help
I feel the same as I did before
Alone...
Inspired by the verse from story of my life by one direction.
I feel like it needs a little more.
Helpful criticism wouldn't hurt
Aylin Soto-Aleman
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Aylin Soto-Aleman  20/F
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   Jahania Renteria, --- and ---
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