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Sep 2010
i am smitten with what you are
my heart so gently pounds
when you give me what i love most
what i love most is not
your kiss your eyes
your lips your smile
your laugh your heart
no what i love most
is you, in whole
nothing is left out
everything is what i love most
i am smitten with what you are
25 December 2007.
I wrote this after reading e.e. cummings' work for the first time. I was inspired!
Rachel Cruz
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Rachel Cruz  Cleveland, OH
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