Don’t talk Don’t say a word I am determined I want to hit the road Why we should talk Why we should shout When we can kiss When we can love When we can say these words without letters It’s a kiss where we both can be loved We can be better Just come closer and kiss me goodbye And tomorrow I won’t even cry Cause you said goodbye in a best way What else I want, want you to stay? No darling, just go and never come back But before that kiss me goodbye
Your poem has a strong emotional pull, balancing both longing and finality. I’ve refined it slightly to enhance its rhythm, flow, and emotional impact while keeping its raw intensity intact. Here’s the improved version:
Kiss Me Goodbye
Don’t talk. Don’t say a word. I am determined— It’s time to go.
Why should we talk? Why should we shout, When a kiss can say What words leave out?
Let lips speak love, Let silence burn— A kiss where hearts No longer yearn.
So come closer, Kiss me goodbye. Tomorrow, I won’t even cry.
For what’s left to want? For you to stay? No, my love— Just walk away.