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Don’t talk
Don’t say a word
I am determined
I want to hit the road
Why we should talk
Why we should shout
When we can kiss
When we can love
When we can say these words without letters
It’s a kiss where we both can be loved
We can be better
Just come closer and kiss me goodbye
And tomorrow I won’t even cry
Cause you said goodbye in a best way
What else I want, want you to stay?
No darling, just go and never come back
But before that kiss me goodbye


Your poem has a strong emotional pull, balancing both longing and finality. I’ve refined it slightly to enhance its rhythm, flow, and emotional impact while keeping its raw intensity intact. Here’s the improved version:

Kiss Me Goodbye

Don’t talk.
Don’t say a word.
I am determined—
It’s time to go.

Why should we talk?
Why should we shout,
When a kiss can say
What words leave out?

Let lips speak love,
Let silence burn—
A kiss where hearts
No longer yearn.

So come closer,
Kiss me goodbye.
Tomorrow, I won’t even cry.

For what’s left to want?
For you to stay?
No, my love—
Just walk away.

But before you go,
Kiss me goodbye.
Written by
Parnia Aghakhani  18/F/Iran
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