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Feb 2020
He’s a behavior problem
He’s really smart
He’ll get you killed
He’ll save your life

He’s really smart
He’s too aggressive
He’ll save your life
Look at that face

He’s too aggressive
We’re going to war
Look at that face
He’s absolutely fearless

We’re going to war
He’ll get you killed
He’s absolutely fearless
I was a behavior problem too
I've been experimenting with different poetic forms. This is the first in a series of Pantoums.
Ellis Reyes
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Ellis Reyes  M/USA
(M/USA)   
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   Ben Noah Suri and BLT
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