I didn’t ask for your “constructive criticism”

but you don’t care

Your words leave me stuck in a bitter prism

Just me, no one else is there

I’m alone with words

They bounce around creating whirlwinds of trouble and love

trouble and love
you’ve caged my dove
with your unsolicited advice

little bits of self love that were slowly gravitating towards each other
now scatter away like mice
-L.R