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Sep 2018
I think the biggest mistake I ever made
As I wrote these words upon a page,

Was the thinking that these lines were a limited stage
Thinking that my work was defined by a structure
Of quatrains or sestets or rhyming couplets.

Was thinking that there even needed to be structure
That there needed to be a rhyme.
My mistake was thinking that poetry has a look
That poetry has a flow, a correct way in which it has to be done
But poetry is not the amount of lines that you write
Or the amount of times you can rhyme the words at the end of a sentence

Because words that rhyme can still amount to no substance
Because poetry cannot be defined by AABB
Because my poetry is nothing but a depiction of me

So now I write from my heart
From my soul
From me as a whole
And if my emotion slips through the cracks
Filling this void with exuberant emotion
Then so be it
Because this is my showcase
And this is me
And on this page
Is my poetry
I wrote this years ago when a poetry workshop visited and we spoke to some poets. I have no doubt that this was one of those events that changed the way i write. It seems like a draft at a first glance, with a lack of punctuation and an odd structure but this was just something i wrote in one. I didn't go back or remove words, I just left it as it was when i finished it because to me it just seemed...pure.
Written by
Kushal  24/M/South Africa
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