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Down the Trail by the River (travelogue)

A demure tap-tap-Tap came from behind

the windward side of the cabin screen door

The knock-Knock had a feral rhythm

but not as fast as a woodpecker’s tapping rap

... more like a hesitant slender hollow fist

full of curiosity and an empty sugar bowl

held anxiously in the other pragmatic palm

 

Not a glass half full or half empty ―

just something practical to carry sugar in

sans reason or not for any to be borrowed;

it's such a simple thing to ask out loud

Sweetness betides a currency of hope

even strangers alone together can't hide

Boldly beckoning with the first handmade tolling

shed upon that old weathered gray door

since stepping back through time

a near month of silence ago

Knotted thoughts only untangled on blank paper

guitar strings disburden the heart like a song lay bare

An unspoken voice can sound as if its a rusty throat;

thickening tongue grows a sixth toe

to trip and stumble on the rising words

At the edge of untamed solitude,

no one often see’s a smile ― and patience is a fallow virtue

But the timid ones don’t survive out here in the bush,

where everyone is from somewhere,

so I knew the slender feminine stature beheld

a strong hearted woman disguised as a wild flower

in the last frontier

 

There was hot water on the wood stove for tea,

pound cake, fragrant strawberries in a bowl

and an old welcome sign leftover from another time

well hung outside the door; hand washed clean cups

hanging by a new red and white checkered towel,

from a day I felt in touch with a man’s salutary side…

 

 

She looked at me and said she knew what I was feeling

and

I said I understood what I saw in her eyes

 

She asked what was inside the beat-up guitar case

I laughed so nervously ― and modestly uttered:

"just a guitar"

 

 

She could have talked down to me as I winced,

shyly embarrassed scarlet red inside,

but instead said coquettishly,…

 

"I heard you play the other day

from down the trail by the river;

whatever’s in there sounds nice" …

I sighed audibly like an irrepressible knee ****

so relieved she was the gentle kind

 

"That was an unwritten song I found unsung

at half-moon lake one night;

so I gathered it up like the sound of silence ―

hidden in that old Dreadnought Martin inside the case

with the other fading fantasies and the rest

of a long unfinished lifeline unspent ―

 

back then to now ― seems like I wasn't even here

 

 

 

harlon rivers ... May 26th, 2018

travelogue: 5 of some more

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Written by
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M / Edge of the woods
Published
May 26, 2018
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Post Script:

Chronilogical travelogue collection; 5 + 1 of some more

https://hellopoetry.com/collection/27104/travelogue/

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