Sombre eyes ~ haiku by Gabrielle Mckenna

Apr 2018

Breathtakingly stark
icy pools in somber eyes
distant, secluded

My first ever haiku. How was it? Any improvements needed?

#sombre #pond #sad #stark #eyes #distant #secluded #love #water #ice

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Gabrielle Mckenna 17/F

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