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Sep 2012
Red eyes,
set so wide.
Perplexed eyes,
that can hide.
Closed eyes
and a broken smile.

Hollow laughter,
an empty voice.
Quiet speak,
a careless speech.
False assurances
with little joy.
A beating heart
and a broken smile.

*No need to be ravelled up so tight,
just let loose and undo the fright
First time sticking to a form, not sure if I like it. Dampens the natural flow, almost rendering the writing process mathematical.
saoirse
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