this reads less like a poem and more like a speech or perhaps, like a friend telling you their day over coffee and I bet right now you can smell the roasted beans the air, thick with the smell of caffeine, whipped cream, possibly a cigar or two
and you hear the voice of your best friend who's telling you about their day
how they had it rough that day Ben from accounting really knew how to ruin a day, let me tell you or perhaps, someone just spilled coffee all over their notes while they were studying
and as much as fifty apologies can mend a relationship, fifty apologies can't dry up your english notes
can we really consider this kind of stuff poetry? it's completely free-form against the norm, little to no rhyme or structure no substance whatsoever
just a mindless person rambling about things that seem ever so slightly relatable
is this really poetry?
i literally spent all of 0 minutes thinking about this please don't enjoy