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The Crooked Man

I met a man along the road

And crooked was his smile

Crooked were the steps he took

Along his crooked miles

 

His arms were long, his fingers too

Though neither pointed straight

His legs were like two twisted ropes

And cause his crooked gait

 

He flashed a crooked grin at me

And bared his crooked teeth

He wore a crooked coat of black

and no shirt underneath

 

His body was a twisted mess

Jutting all around

His crooked bones rattled and cracked

As he shuffled ‘cross the ground

 

“And to where do you go?” His crooked voice rasped

I pretended not to hear

“Answer me my new young friend,

There’s nothing for you to fear.”

 

“I do not know,” I whispered back

“I know not where I roam.

but I know life lies ahead,

and behind me lies my home.”

 

“And where are your friends?” he asked of me

A crooked gleam in his eye.

“They did not want to come,” I said.

“I never did learn why.”

 

“My boy that’s cause they do not care,

You’re not worth caring for!

Look at you; useless, dumb

Weak, ugly, and poor.”

 

“Well how far have you come?” he asked.

“13 years,” I said

“Only 13?!” his broken voice creaked

“Oh, you’re sure to end up dead.”

 

“Better men have walked here than you,

More experienced, and with more help.

They died here alone, and so too will you.

You’re an insignificant whelp.”

____________________________________________

 

I tried to ignore him, really I did

I fought back against all his lies.

But one cruel blow, on one cruel night

I looked straight in the Crooked Man’s eyes.

 

Then before I could scream

My heart broke at the seem

And I felt an unyielding pain

 

My insides were hollow

Mouth too dry to swallow

I begged, “Please, make it stop!”

 

So he took out a brand

And placed it in my hand

“Burn it out of your skin.”

 

Then he watched with a smile

Relaxed for a while

As my agony tickled his ears

 

Though I did as he bade

He took out a blade

“Not enough, try harder my boy!”

 

But the blade and the brand

One in each hand

Could not purge the sorrow within

 

So covered in scars

Beneath all the stars

The rest of my life began

 

I fell to my knees as the crooked man laughed

He placed a crooked hand on my head

“Ignorant boy,” he said with some joy

 

“You’re mine until you’re dead.”

__________________________________________

 

 

For five long years we walked together

Every night a repeat of the first

And when others would pass, I’d smile and laugh

They never knew I was cursed

 

Then one fateful night the Crooked Man said

“You’ve grown so dull and so dry!”

He gave me the knife and said, “End your life.”

“I believe its past time that you die.”

 

I placed the knife against my neck

And felt the familiar blade

Just one more cut, like all the rest

And my tortured life would fade

 

I closed my eyes then took a breath

And felt myself let go

But right before I did the deed

My broken heart said…”no”

 

“no” I said, then “No” I growled

Then “NO!” I screamed and screamed!

I threw the knife into the dirt

And doused the brand that gleamed

 

I turned toward the Crooked Man

His smile had withered away

“Pick that up you worthless cur!”

He tried his best to say

 

I charged at him with all I had

We fell hard into the mud

“You’ll never win,” he grunted, “You’re weak!

You’ve lost far too much blood!”

 

“I have a home you wicked thing!

Some friends and a family too!

And I’ll never die, nor even try

If it means they’re left with you!”

________________________________________

 

I still wrestle with the crooked man

And sometimes he almost wins

But I refuse to lose to him

nor surrender to his whims

 

“I’ll never let you go,” I say,

“Or let you get ahead.

Because you filthy sack of sin

 

You’re mine until you’re dead.

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Written by
elrow-swift
Published
Oct 28, 2017
Lines·Words
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Notes

I attempted to use a switch in the rhyme scheme and the meter to add a feeling of speed and desperation to the middle. It was kind of an experiment so let me know if you like it. As always, thank you for taking the time to read, I hope my story helps those of you who have met the crooked man on your own journey. - ES

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