There’s a thing that I must tell you: I’ll get straight to the point. Verbs make a story, adjectives disjoint. Tell me a story, of who, what, when and where. Don’t just paint a picture and leave me there. Yes, the flowers are pretty and the sun is hot. But we all know that-- interesting, it’s not. Your lover was beautiful. Your mood is sad. But please make something happen or I’ll be fuming mad.
probably no one who needs to read this will read it