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the average human can hold their breath for 30-40 seconds.@$*%5i4???

waking up

is like

coming up for air -

but after you take

that first breath,

youre ready

to go back

under.

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Published: Apr 5, 2016
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Notes: sorry for the random hiatus.
Tags: #depression #breath #waking #water #sleeping #asleep #awake #breathing

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