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Jun 2015
On the ground,
I keep an eye on the world,
the world of flowers,
I've seen succes like the Amaryllis,
the sweet sense of the Apple Blossom,
the desire of Camellia's passion,
and the forgiveness of the daffodil,
So many flowers in this world,
SO many possibilities
feels like a garden,
but something bothers me,
deep inside of me
something I always wonder,
watashi no hana wa doko desuka?
Where is my flower?
After I made the second one.. I wanted to try a serious one. I wasn't sure to post this, because of my poor grammars.

Let me hear what your thought is about my poem. I want to improve my poems in the future with the feedback I know! ^^
MultiBami-mix
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MultiBami-mix  Netherlands
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   Eiliv Advena
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