This poem is still a work in progress.... I need some thoughts... Is there anything I should reword or change?
A Visitor in the Morning Fog Written by Adam M. Snow
Oh what a stage this morning break Waking to a smoke-like sight So thick it covers the dawn opaque The freshly gold now blight My heart is weak, I feel it ache Upon this morning sight Unlike the sun my heart don't hide Nor in the fog it dwell Even though and with my pride This cruel heart I knew so well Left me alone to stride In this smokey hell (more is coming soon)