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Once it stood shining, vibrant, radiant, its brilliance beautifying the surroundings. But now, after a minutely short existence, it is changing, aging, dying. Each tender, silky-white petal turns to a rusty brown, then silently breaks away and falls peacefully, gently, to the ground. As I watch helplessly, I frown, knowing that soon it will all be over.
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Apr 21, 2020
Apr 21, 2020 at 4:46 PM UTC
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Once it stood shining, vibrant, radiant, its brilliance beautifying the surroundings. But now, after a minutely short existence, it is changing, aging, dying. Each tender, silky-white petal turns to a rusty brown, then silently breaks away and falls peacefully, gently, to the ground. As I watch helplessly, I frown, knowing that soon it will all be over.
©1986, Steven S. McNutt The first poem I ever wrote that I truly thought was good. Thankfully, it was not the last.
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Apr 21, 2020
Apr 21, 2020 at 4:46 PM UTC
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