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From my view, while side eyeing beyond the periphery I basically see a place that's not a place anybody would actually choose to be But when it's the landscape of your own psyche It's hard to see any way out of the intensity that will always accompany insanity And no one can hear your inner voice plea for much needed mercy Begging yourself to set yourself free But this inescapable captivity is your eternity But it just occurred to me, I can't tell if this is free will or destiny... Did I choose to fall slowly? Maybe I decided to come undone gradually Or did some higher power think this was best for me? Either way's bad news for my trajectory   Zero possibly of a redemption story No guts No glory Just constantly repeating "sorry" ©2024
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Jul 8, 2024
Jul 8, 2024 at 11:23 AM UTC
~•§•~ Free Will or Destiny? ~•§•~
From my view, while side eyeing beyond the periphery I basically see a place that's not a place anybody would actually choose to be But when it's the landscape of your own psyche It's hard to see any way out of the intensity that will always accompany insanity And no one can hear your inner voice plea for much needed mercy Begging yourself to set yourself free But this inescapable captivity is your eternity But it just occurred to me, I can't tell if this is free will or destiny... Did I choose to fall slowly? Maybe I decided to come undone gradually Or did some higher power think this was best for me? Either way's bad news for my trajectory   Zero possibly of a redemption story No guts No glory Just constantly repeating "sorry" ©2024
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42/M/Washington State
Jul 8, 2024
Jul 8, 2024 at 11:23 AM UTC
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