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I do not like the architecture of the mall. It's discordant and lax. The architects dismissed all Edwardian charm and even the Gothic grace. When crossing my field of vision, the mall concedes defeat, whimpering against a prismatic sky: "I am a hodgepodge of ambition distressed, resolute on pioneering a style unlike anything past, but locked off in dead history, trapped in a monologue whose audience is myself." I presume it's the same across the world, architecture molded into something impulsive, something so forced it falls flat. Where have all the artchitects gone?
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Jul 26, 2013
Jul 26, 2013 at 4:07 PM UTC
I do not like the architecture of the mall
I do not like the architecture of the mall. It's discordant and lax. The architects dismissed all Edwardian charm and even the Gothic grace. When crossing my field of vision, the mall concedes defeat, whimpering against a prismatic sky: "I am a hodgepodge of ambition distressed, resolute on pioneering a style unlike anything past, but locked off in dead history, trapped in a monologue whose audience is myself." I presume it's the same across the world, architecture molded into something impulsive, something so forced it falls flat. Where have all the artchitects gone?
christopher-howard-gorrie
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Jul 26, 2013
Jul 26, 2013 at 4:07 PM UTC
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