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Comfort me So why have you left me alone with nothin’ to grasp in the dark? Lost unto the shadows of silence’ flight… Oh what have I done pray tell to deserve this night? I feel You… don't understand my pain see, I know this now to be true else, why am I pourin’ out my heart in vain? How is it that you continue to not see me, look right thru? Broken… inside, never wanted to lose my true why pretend This Shade, keeps me from feeling brittle from the cold So you must comprehend this has to end... Though I suspect, it truly don't matter sought, shelter looking for a real friend instead like sand, blasted my heart shatter’d N’ I see the darkness coming back 'round the bend... No longer need I wonder why, I'm not 'effort-afforded' a thing go on…so go, move bye, wasted tears have now dried momentary was the light shining in the dark's ring but you can put it all on yourself, because I know that I really tried... This Shade hurts like without feeling me, deep a troubled soul so alone, wish I felt some light, instead I'm still just trapped inside the Shade...
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3d ago
May 31, 2026 at 10:56 AM UTC
And the Shade used to...
Comfort me So why have you left me alone with nothin’ to grasp in the dark? Lost unto the shadows of silence’ flight… Oh what have I done pray tell to deserve this night? I feel You… don't understand my pain see, I know this now to be true else, why am I pourin’ out my heart in vain? How is it that you continue to not see me, look right thru? Broken… inside, never wanted to lose my true why pretend This Shade, keeps me from feeling brittle from the cold So you must comprehend this has to end... Though I suspect, it truly don't matter sought, shelter looking for a real friend instead like sand, blasted my heart shatter’d N’ I see the darkness coming back 'round the bend... No longer need I wonder why, I'm not 'effort-afforded' a thing go on…so go, move bye, wasted tears have now dried momentary was the light shining in the dark's ring but you can put it all on yourself, because I know that I really tried... This Shade hurts like without feeling me, deep a troubled soul so alone, wish I felt some light, instead I'm still just trapped inside the Shade...
This is about disillusionment at the betrayal of someone who once was thought a reliable trusted source that suddenly showed they weren’t actually ever that.
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May 31, 2026 at 10:56 AM UTC
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