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If you were to discover That your dearest lover Was nothing more than a robotic cover Would you be horrified that you were so keen In adoration for a machine? Perhaps you would feel a little cheated. But I think you are being slightly conceited You never noticed they were an imitation, Why then, do think of them as some kind of violation? Obviously you find yourself to be superior. Is it because they are just nuts and bolts past their exterior? Think a little deeper, Is material really what makes them cheaper? I have a pretty strong notion That your problem lies with the fact they possess “artificial” emotion. Oh, do explain! What is it that gives you the impression a brain, A collection of chemical and vein, Is not giving you a fabricated sensation, Much like the one experienced by the imitation. Now do you see how absurd it is to decide that what we “feel” Is somehow much more “real”?
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Dec 29, 2016
Dec 29, 2016 at 5:50 PM UTC
The Illusion of Chemical Fusion
If you were to discover That your dearest lover Was nothing more than a robotic cover Would you be horrified that you were so keen In adoration for a machine? Perhaps you would feel a little cheated. But I think you are being slightly conceited You never noticed they were an imitation, Why then, do think of them as some kind of violation? Obviously you find yourself to be superior. Is it because they are just nuts and bolts past their exterior? Think a little deeper, Is material really what makes them cheaper? I have a pretty strong notion That your problem lies with the fact they possess “artificial” emotion. Oh, do explain! What is it that gives you the impression a brain, A collection of chemical and vein, Is not giving you a fabricated sensation, Much like the one experienced by the imitation. Now do you see how absurd it is to decide that what we “feel” Is somehow much more “real”?
Originally written June ‎09, ‎2014. The first poem I ever wrote out of my own desire.
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Dec 29, 2016
Dec 29, 2016 at 5:50 PM UTC
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