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~ Cast among the downpour, gates beneath dark clouds left open The creek is rising, drowning underbrush darkening tree trunks moving swiftly the discarded Collected at the walls of this home stone and mortar slowly crumble From a desperate vantage point overlooking nature’s angry powers I see a shape, a silhouetted aura, eyelet gown of gold stitch, woven ribbon dreams Mahogany hair flowing, eyes captivating, floating atop muddied raging waters, directing the flow with blown kiss persuasion Swept away, barely a breath remains, swallowing life in murderous gulps Flailing intoxicated waves, undertow’s grasp… when a hand reaches, fingers interlock Glazing blue skies whisper in sunlit reflections, ocean breezes soothe washed out tides, as a sand dollar wishes on a seashell Upon this beach I am now safe within her heartbeat, tasting her Pina Colada lips, warm and sweet I drink in her flavour neath palm tree shadows, cool in the heat, but hot of her skin, salty, wet and my heart hears the glistening, tingling my senses drenching me in desire’s hard to contain, as I endlessly drown in her perfect love
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May 28, 2015
May 28, 2015 at 12:12 PM UTC
Endlessly Drowning (Un-rhymed version)
~ Cast among the downpour, gates beneath dark clouds left open The creek is rising, drowning underbrush darkening tree trunks moving swiftly the discarded Collected at the walls of this home stone and mortar slowly crumble From a desperate vantage point overlooking nature’s angry powers I see a shape, a silhouetted aura, eyelet gown of gold stitch, woven ribbon dreams Mahogany hair flowing, eyes captivating, floating atop muddied raging waters, directing the flow with blown kiss persuasion Swept away, barely a breath remains, swallowing life in murderous gulps Flailing intoxicated waves, undertow’s grasp… when a hand reaches, fingers interlock Glazing blue skies whisper in sunlit reflections, ocean breezes soothe washed out tides, as a sand dollar wishes on a seashell Upon this beach I am now safe within her heartbeat, tasting her Pina Colada lips, warm and sweet I drink in her flavour neath palm tree shadows, cool in the heat, but hot of her skin, salty, wet and my heart hears the glistening, tingling my senses drenching me in desire’s hard to contain, as I endlessly drown in her perfect love
I wrote this poem first and then wrote a rhyming version of it that I will post at a later date. It is kind of long, so I am posting this one first.
chris-g
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May 28, 2015
May 28, 2015 at 12:12 PM UTC
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