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A girl of only seventeen, who knew you could make so many mistakes. Was it that long ago? Your dress was always white and you could sleep without worrying or waking yourself from muttering "no, no, no, I don't know this person I've become." What have you done? You crashed your car for the second time, careless/stupid/thoughtless/daft. When's the last time you didn't make your mother mad? You loved too many boys you didn't know because falling into bed is easier than getting up again. You smoke like a new bad habit and your best friend's a soon-to-be addict; you said you knew you had sinned and yet you still refused to repent. The verdict is in: it seems the world would be a better place if you weren't in it.
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Dec 8, 2014
Dec 8, 2014 at 7:43 PM UTC
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A girl of only seventeen, who knew you could make so many mistakes. Was it that long ago? Your dress was always white and you could sleep without worrying or waking yourself from muttering "no, no, no, I don't know this person I've become." What have you done? You crashed your car for the second time, careless/stupid/thoughtless/daft. When's the last time you didn't make your mother mad? You loved too many boys you didn't know because falling into bed is easier than getting up again. You smoke like a new bad habit and your best friend's a soon-to-be addict; you said you knew you had sinned and yet you still refused to repent. The verdict is in: it seems the world would be a better place if you weren't in it.
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Dec 8, 2014
Dec 8, 2014 at 7:43 PM UTC
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