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While scrolling through feed after feed, I wonder if these lines— tapped out at midnight, lit by screens and caffeine— will endure. Will they outlast Keats’s nightingale, Burns’s red, red rose? Or drift away like leaves in autumn wind, unnoticed, unclaimed? I wonder if poems typed in silence can hold. The rake is a keyboard now— plastic teeth scraping thought into lines. Keats had a nightingale. I have a username, a thread that scrolls without end. Burns sang of roses. I write in pixels, red with longing, aching for reply. Frost went “Out, Out—” over a chainsaw, not a saw. The tool changed. The cut stayed clean. Yet here I am, posting still, hoping for a flicker, a kindred spark to find me in the static. The world shifts— tools, styles, the shape of our voices— but words remain, binding us across the hush. So here is my offering: raw and honest lines, a digital rake clearing the leaves of thought.
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Nov 6, 2025
Nov 6, 2025 at 10:46 PM UTC
While Posting Late
While scrolling through feed after feed, I wonder if these lines— tapped out at midnight, lit by screens and caffeine— will endure. Will they outlast Keats’s nightingale, Burns’s red, red rose? Or drift away like leaves in autumn wind, unnoticed, unclaimed? I wonder if poems typed in silence can hold. The rake is a keyboard now— plastic teeth scraping thought into lines. Keats had a nightingale. I have a username, a thread that scrolls without end. Burns sang of roses. I write in pixels, red with longing, aching for reply. Frost went “Out, Out—” over a chainsaw, not a saw. The tool changed. The cut stayed clean. Yet here I am, posting still, hoping for a flicker, a kindred spark to find me in the static. The world shifts— tools, styles, the shape of our voices— but words remain, binding us across the hush. So here is my offering: raw and honest lines, a digital rake clearing the leaves of thought.
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54/M/North Carolina USA
Nov 6, 2025
Nov 6, 2025 at 10:46 PM UTC
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