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On long car rides late at night, You finally exit the freeway' And the car slows to a gentle stop. The lost momentum stirs you and your eyes open Just enough to see the car's insides bathed in red light. Your eyes are more comfortable when they're closed, And the warm air whispering from the vents invites you To slip under completely. The early morning, when you still have an hour or two of sleep. You turn to get more comfortable, Feeling the warm spot where you used to be. You sigh deeply and, For a moment, You think you catch the scent of your own home. You pull your sheets higher and feel your body relax. The teacher is lecturing. You feel your legs grow heavy. Your blinks become longer until It's more work to open them than you're willing to put forth. The fluorescents buzz a lullaby just for you. You hear, but you can't listen. A sharp jolt. Your head bobs. You are awake. You're seconds away from falling asleep. A dull flash lights your eyelids, and Though your breathing stays the same, Your heart rumbles with the distant thunder. You are made aware, Once more, Of the steady patter of rain on your window.
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Jan 24, 2019
Jan 24, 2019 at 12:52 AM UTC
Kinds of Partial Consciousness
On long car rides late at night, You finally exit the freeway' And the car slows to a gentle stop. The lost momentum stirs you and your eyes open Just enough to see the car's insides bathed in red light. Your eyes are more comfortable when they're closed, And the warm air whispering from the vents invites you To slip under completely. The early morning, when you still have an hour or two of sleep. You turn to get more comfortable, Feeling the warm spot where you used to be. You sigh deeply and, For a moment, You think you catch the scent of your own home. You pull your sheets higher and feel your body relax. The teacher is lecturing. You feel your legs grow heavy. Your blinks become longer until It's more work to open them than you're willing to put forth. The fluorescents buzz a lullaby just for you. You hear, but you can't listen. A sharp jolt. Your head bobs. You are awake. You're seconds away from falling asleep. A dull flash lights your eyelids, and Though your breathing stays the same, Your heart rumbles with the distant thunder. You are made aware, Once more, Of the steady patter of rain on your window.
AnonymousSpectacles
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Jan 24, 2019
Jan 24, 2019 at 12:52 AM UTC
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