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Encased in metal, their bodies careened towards the city. The grinding, the metal on metal screeching, quieted their thoughts. Head against glass, crowded and foggy, the mother in grey plots her scheme to the nearest bottle of liquor. The man with guilt in his eyes, clutches her hand and wonders when he can get away. They coast past creeks of muck and cigarette butts. Two bodies on their way to the next hour. The small girl sleeps on her mothers chest breathing foul ash from the air. Her father smokes with his hand behind a book and exhales sour remorse from his worn lungs. The mother with heavy eyes, avoids wishful thinking. She has never relied on luck, so she sits, encased in metal ignoring faces and avoiding eyes.
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Aug 12, 2014
Aug 12, 2014 at 7:15 PM UTC
Portrait of a Subway
Encased in metal, their bodies careened towards the city. The grinding, the metal on metal screeching, quieted their thoughts. Head against glass, crowded and foggy, the mother in grey plots her scheme to the nearest bottle of liquor. The man with guilt in his eyes, clutches her hand and wonders when he can get away. They coast past creeks of muck and cigarette butts. Two bodies on their way to the next hour. The small girl sleeps on her mothers chest breathing foul ash from the air. Her father smokes with his hand behind a book and exhales sour remorse from his worn lungs. The mother with heavy eyes, avoids wishful thinking. She has never relied on luck, so she sits, encased in metal ignoring faces and avoiding eyes.
joshua-hernandez
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33/M/Mexican
Aug 12, 2014
Aug 12, 2014 at 7:15 PM UTC
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