Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
You saw the girl sitting at the corner table of the cafe in Edinburgh thin ill looking sipping the coffee. You walked over to her and said ye swatch nae weel. She looked at you what's it tae ye? she said buck aff. You smiled and sat down can ah gie ye something? you said. She looked past you at the small cafe door then back at you. Chocolate if ye want she said her voice softer less hostile. You went to the counter and bought a few bars of chocolate and another coffee and sat down again and gave her the bars. Aw fur me? she said. You nodded and smiled. She opened a bar of chocolate and ate it quickly eyeing you steadily. What's in it fur ye? she said. Depends you replied. Depends oan wit? she said. Ye can bide wi' me at mah place you said eyeing her paleness and her thinness. She ate on looking at you. After the one bar she ate the other sipping at her coffee in between. Once she'd finished and said she'd go with you but had to go to the toilet first so she went off. You sat there watching the other people in the cafe. She returned after a while looking white and her eyes were red. You both left the cafe back to your place with nothing more said.
0
Jun 11, 2017
Jun 11, 2017 at 8:30 AM UTC
LINDSAY MET KERSTEEN 1996.
You saw the girl sitting at the corner table of the cafe in Edinburgh thin ill looking sipping the coffee. You walked over to her and said ye swatch nae weel. She looked at you what's it tae ye? she said buck aff. You smiled and sat down can ah gie ye something? you said. She looked past you at the small cafe door then back at you. Chocolate if ye want she said her voice softer less hostile. You went to the counter and bought a few bars of chocolate and another coffee and sat down again and gave her the bars. Aw fur me? she said. You nodded and smiled. She opened a bar of chocolate and ate it quickly eyeing you steadily. What's in it fur ye? she said. Depends you replied. Depends oan wit? she said. Ye can bide wi' me at mah place you said eyeing her paleness and her thinness. She ate on looking at you. After the one bar she ate the other sipping at her coffee in between. Once she'd finished and said she'd go with you but had to go to the toilet first so she went off. You sat there watching the other people in the cafe. She returned after a while looking white and her eyes were red. You both left the cafe back to your place with nothing more said.
TWO SCOTTISH GIRLS MEET IN EDINBURGH 1996
TerryCollett
Written by
Jun 11, 2017
Jun 11, 2017 at 8:30 AM UTC
Request permission to use this poem