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awakening torturing mind with stark perfection of a song serving as the giving mother who never did try to hold you so close as the clouds break in rapid succession in a sweltering sky tiptoe through lands of dreams, afraid to witness awakening to ruddy shots of possibility postponing courage again, testing the waters proving that theories move in odd ways rushing to bite the hand which holds out a bleeding heart in hopes of acceptance there’s a hollow ring in the crater when shouts fall on deaf ears but comprehension leaks fluid like organic matter from a sieve and words are mere petals straining to hold onto the flower head but the strands of life must persist in natural fall among so many other things, we lose sixty hair strands each day--- why stop at reason? lap and with eyes closed, you place your head on my lap and I stroke away all your cares in the hopes to soften that blistered terrain raging inside and sagacity will wash over us and render sweet oblivion to concerns of the world there will come in our lives, so many laps and countless hurdles can one really place importance on which lap counts more than another?
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Jan 13, 2014
Jan 13, 2014 at 5:24 AM UTC
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awakening torturing mind with stark perfection of a song serving as the giving mother who never did try to hold you so close as the clouds break in rapid succession in a sweltering sky tiptoe through lands of dreams, afraid to witness awakening to ruddy shots of possibility postponing courage again, testing the waters proving that theories move in odd ways rushing to bite the hand which holds out a bleeding heart in hopes of acceptance there’s a hollow ring in the crater when shouts fall on deaf ears but comprehension leaks fluid like organic matter from a sieve and words are mere petals straining to hold onto the flower head but the strands of life must persist in natural fall among so many other things, we lose sixty hair strands each day--- why stop at reason? lap and with eyes closed, you place your head on my lap and I stroke away all your cares in the hopes to soften that blistered terrain raging inside and sagacity will wash over us and render sweet oblivion to concerns of the world there will come in our lives, so many laps and countless hurdles can one really place importance on which lap counts more than another?
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Jan 13, 2014
Jan 13, 2014 at 5:24 AM UTC
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