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~ his heart’s response, its waterfall; cascade tumbling, cleanses all embattled, dusty trenches, these heart-wrenched, rusty, dried-out ends; a faucet opened, floodgates broken, spillway leading to relief; channel of redemption, overcomes his apprehension, and dares to bare his heart’s intention; betrays the truth that lies beneath, yes, his bottled tears need this release, and his longing, thirsty soul it finally quenches. ~ *post script. if a man weeps in the darkness does anyone hear?  does his culture drive that man to hide his inner fears?  is he emasculated by his tears?  do they infer his weakness, or do they simply reveal his humanity, his identity that is neither culture nor age defined, his propensity to feel all that it is to be human... if they would but let him?  perhaps i am just one of the fortunate ones; who employs a blend of caring, understanding friends and the rest-who-don’t-be-damned!  what is the price to be paid for those who are not as lucky as i?*
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Mar 29, 2015
Mar 29, 2015 at 1:22 PM UTC
spillway
~ his heart’s response, its waterfall; cascade tumbling, cleanses all embattled, dusty trenches, these heart-wrenched, rusty, dried-out ends; a faucet opened, floodgates broken, spillway leading to relief; channel of redemption, overcomes his apprehension, and dares to bare his heart’s intention; betrays the truth that lies beneath, yes, his bottled tears need this release, and his longing, thirsty soul it finally quenches. ~ *post script. if a man weeps in the darkness does anyone hear?  does his culture drive that man to hide his inner fears?  is he emasculated by his tears?  do they infer his weakness, or do they simply reveal his humanity, his identity that is neither culture nor age defined, his propensity to feel all that it is to be human... if they would but let him?  perhaps i am just one of the fortunate ones; who employs a blend of caring, understanding friends and the rest-who-don’t-be-damned!  what is the price to be paid for those who are not as lucky as i?*
se-reimer
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Mar 29, 2015
Mar 29, 2015 at 1:22 PM UTC
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