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~ Dishevelled he stood, unable to speak, from years of abuse in youthful upkeep the years of admonishment had taken their toll reduced to obsequious, lugubrious soul the once-happy boy, unable to opine, or quip in humour, save garble and whine, decades would pass before he'd undo and jettison the harm taken years to accrue now he stood dumb, bewildered and slow, top ziggurat of abuse, debilitating blow, still, gentle flower, a gem unscratched, as new-borne babe, chick freshly hatched unprimed, unready, for onslaught of world, the cruel schadenfreude, the evil unfurled, the juggernaut of malevolence, of intemperate hurt that would crush gentle flower, dissolve into dirt.
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Feb 8, 2022
Feb 8, 2022 at 5:21 AM UTC
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~ Dishevelled he stood, unable to speak, from years of abuse in youthful upkeep the years of admonishment had taken their toll reduced to obsequious, lugubrious soul the once-happy boy, unable to opine, or quip in humour, save garble and whine, decades would pass before he'd undo and jettison the harm taken years to accrue now he stood dumb, bewildered and slow, top ziggurat of abuse, debilitating blow, still, gentle flower, a gem unscratched, as new-borne babe, chick freshly hatched unprimed, unready, for onslaught of world, the cruel schadenfreude, the evil unfurled, the juggernaut of malevolence, of intemperate hurt that would crush gentle flower, dissolve into dirt.
BLT's Merriam-Webster Word of The Day Challenge #dishevelled, admonish, obsequious, lugubrious, opine, quip, garble, jettison, ziggurat, debilitating, schadenfreude, juggernaut, intemperate,
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Feb 8, 2022
Feb 8, 2022 at 5:21 AM UTC
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