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I watched adrift on a putrid plank That had saved me once before ‘Twas the elusive Pride of the Pacific Constructed in ‘74 Her bronze bells and mighty foghorn Commanded all to make way And the tides knelt beside her feet To congregate as they say: “Tis pitiful, such punishment Bestown upon the Ancient Blue Our vengeance creeps forth each day And will drown this peace askew. Their corpulence, disgusting As they carouse all day and night Limiting themselves to their marvels” Alas! A human they spied in sight! “The humans have rejected you From their blissful celebration Now let us stir up trouble For complete annihilation!” With swift currents bombarding, The passengers fled with haste And in one implacable calamity, The ship was left to waste The bronze bells won’t resound With the ship flipped on its hull The foghorn’s left to drown As beauty is left to null. I sobbed adrift a putrid plank Never abandoned from the start “Such horrors would go unnoticed If humanity had the heart!”
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Mar 4, 2010
Mar 4, 2010 at 10:32 AM UTC
Adrift
I watched adrift on a putrid plank That had saved me once before ‘Twas the elusive Pride of the Pacific Constructed in ‘74 Her bronze bells and mighty foghorn Commanded all to make way And the tides knelt beside her feet To congregate as they say: “Tis pitiful, such punishment Bestown upon the Ancient Blue Our vengeance creeps forth each day And will drown this peace askew. Their corpulence, disgusting As they carouse all day and night Limiting themselves to their marvels” Alas! A human they spied in sight! “The humans have rejected you From their blissful celebration Now let us stir up trouble For complete annihilation!” With swift currents bombarding, The passengers fled with haste And in one implacable calamity, The ship was left to waste The bronze bells won’t resound With the ship flipped on its hull The foghorn’s left to drown As beauty is left to null. I sobbed adrift a putrid plank Never abandoned from the start “Such horrors would go unnoticed If humanity had the heart!”
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Mar 4, 2010
Mar 4, 2010 at 10:32 AM UTC
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