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Started off in the [clouds] and after falling and crashing down, touched the roots of a redwood. Now with the help of giraffes I scale it's back as I'm looking to climb my way up the trunk. Branch after branch, contact causing **** hoping no one stops my conquest and burns this tree to ash. Talking to fauna, birds chirp, to attempt continuing this saga, after she left I reduced to nothing but a larva, as I now undergo the metamorphosis, similar to that of Kafka's. Trauma induces this   determination, of being reunited in clouds with her creation, and if up there nothing for me is waiting, then abort mission, swing towards a new notion, and from the the clouds I'm perched upon, jump and plummet into the [ocean]. 25 hours pass before the tip of the tree is reached and as the sun rises, I realize I'm above the horizon and on clouds perched I instantly recognize the eyes hidden under eyelids. Finally we've met again, tragic ending as I reach for her to grab my hand. Unstably standing on this branch and as she hands me hers, she retreats and pulls back. Slipping, she let me fall and midair I hear my heart crack, falling thousands of feet, I'm thinking of the love she couldn't keep, and before the impact a thought passes my head; so honest. Humans like myself, too ambitious in their conquest, meant to stay at trunk of trees, and clouds, strictly homes for a goddess.
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Dec 2, 2013
Dec 2, 2013 at 2:51 PM UTC
[clouds&trees]
Started off in the [clouds] and after falling and crashing down, touched the roots of a redwood. Now with the help of giraffes I scale it's back as I'm looking to climb my way up the trunk. Branch after branch, contact causing **** hoping no one stops my conquest and burns this tree to ash. Talking to fauna, birds chirp, to attempt continuing this saga, after she left I reduced to nothing but a larva, as I now undergo the metamorphosis, similar to that of Kafka's. Trauma induces this   determination, of being reunited in clouds with her creation, and if up there nothing for me is waiting, then abort mission, swing towards a new notion, and from the the clouds I'm perched upon, jump and plummet into the [ocean]. 25 hours pass before the tip of the tree is reached and as the sun rises, I realize I'm above the horizon and on clouds perched I instantly recognize the eyes hidden under eyelids. Finally we've met again, tragic ending as I reach for her to grab my hand. Unstably standing on this branch and as she hands me hers, she retreats and pulls back. Slipping, she let me fall and midair I hear my heart crack, falling thousands of feet, I'm thinking of the love she couldn't keep, and before the impact a thought passes my head; so honest. Humans like myself, too ambitious in their conquest, meant to stay at trunk of trees, and clouds, strictly homes for a goddess.
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25/Dominican
Dec 2, 2013
Dec 2, 2013 at 2:51 PM UTC
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