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the drunken door is open    issuing fumes the loss of what society betrays    a deflated relaxed option                                                           of empty rebellion season away life   in mood with loss fumed with the doorway    and its dark yawn i am reminded of putting fruit flies 'to sleep'                             in a school lab class
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Feb 19, 2025
Feb 19, 2025 at 4:07 PM UTC
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the drunken door is open    issuing fumes the loss of what society betrays    a deflated relaxed option                                                           of empty rebellion season away life   in mood with loss fumed with the doorway    and its dark yawn i am reminded of putting fruit flies 'to sleep'                             in a school lab class
11/02/25 [note : fruit flies in science class has been used before by me.. self plagiarizing]
neth-jones
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Feb 19, 2025
Feb 19, 2025 at 4:07 PM UTC
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