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Falling cones from upper branches scatter across the forest floor. At the foot of the redwood, Wildflowers thrive among ash. Through cycles of time— spire seeds, fallen blooms, and windborne dust return to the soil, their essence carried upward, woven into the sentinel’s grain. Standing tall—our dear one is heartwood amongst old friends. Hear his voice as branches stir. Catch the flash of his smile in sun light filtering down; see stars dance across his dew-laced mane. Feel him near in the evergreen hush.                        —•0•—
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Nov 18, 2025
Nov 18, 2025 at 10:38 PM UTC
In the Evergreen Hush (Elegy for Chris)
Falling cones from upper branches scatter across the forest floor. At the foot of the redwood, Wildflowers thrive among ash. Through cycles of time— spire seeds, fallen blooms, and windborne dust return to the soil, their essence carried upward, woven into the sentinel’s grain. Standing tall—our dear one is heartwood amongst old friends. Hear his voice as branches stir. Catch the flash of his smile in sun light filtering down; see stars dance across his dew-laced mane. Feel him near in the evergreen hush.                        —•0•—
Christion was a member of Cal Fire’s Mendocino Unit. Those he left behind laid him to rest before a young redwood tree.
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Nov 18, 2025
Nov 18, 2025 at 10:38 PM UTC
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