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We walked into my room as happy as could be even though it's only been two days. You looked at me and said "Baby, I love you." I looked at you and said "What did you say?" "I said I love you" "That's what I thought you said. Come with me." Runs into bedroom ***"Oh yea, just like I planned, *** on the second date."*** He whispered to himself. He walks into the bedroom and before he knows what hit him or in this case knows what "Stabbed" him, I stabbed him in the back and he fell to the floor with a thump. ***:Nice try ******* but I love you doesn't work on me.***
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Jan 21, 2015
Jan 21, 2015 at 8:23 PM UTC
The day you said I love you.
We walked into my room as happy as could be even though it's only been two days. You looked at me and said "Baby, I love you." I looked at you and said "What did you say?" "I said I love you" "That's what I thought you said. Come with me." Runs into bedroom ***"Oh yea, just like I planned, *** on the second date."*** He whispered to himself. He walks into the bedroom and before he knows what hit him or in this case knows what "Stabbed" him, I stabbed him in the back and he fell to the floor with a thump. ***:Nice try ******* but I love you doesn't work on me.***
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Jan 21, 2015
Jan 21, 2015 at 8:23 PM UTC
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