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~for Steve R. & Stephen Y.~ *"two regrets are mine - not finding you earlier in life when...words would have carved for me a better road, and...not hand-ing you a touch, the perfect tightness-shake of one's hand reserved for fondest friends and the light press on one's back deserved for dearest brothers!" ~~~* the light press surety of five fingers on one, oh, what messages it composes, oh, what duty weighty it transmits dear brothers: tho this hands-on handoff, this fly-over, is still a   mission unaccomplished, yet no regrets, please! men don't overuse superlatives, what you lovingly uncover in my rocket-verbal Mars probes, is more telling, more revealing of who you are, than any hand-tightness shake, any touching grasp, could e'er convey yet I promise, forsworn upon the cross of the north west Pacifico latitude and longitude a latitude that just happens to intersect my olden, new english state, knowing that Interstate 90 a straight transcontinental shot, and the car keys just an impulse grab away to tell your arms, your face, your back, our hands, that when you love my poetry, you love me, you friends, are an affirmation of Pablo Neruda's words: ***"whoever discovers who I am discovers who you are"*** fondness is not distance constrained, touching grasps pay no obeisance to time, the honor of your affection permanent affirmed and enflamed, all mine, sublime, to lead my heart, where to lay hands upon your back, to realize even more our single united rhyme
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Nov 7, 2015
Nov 7, 2015 at 4:58 PM UTC
"whoever discovers who I am, discovers who you are"
~for Steve R. & Stephen Y.~ *"two regrets are mine - not finding you earlier in life when...words would have carved for me a better road, and...not hand-ing you a touch, the perfect tightness-shake of one's hand reserved for fondest friends and the light press on one's back deserved for dearest brothers!" ~~~* the light press surety of five fingers on one, oh, what messages it composes, oh, what duty weighty it transmits dear brothers: tho this hands-on handoff, this fly-over, is still a   mission unaccomplished, yet no regrets, please! men don't overuse superlatives, what you lovingly uncover in my rocket-verbal Mars probes, is more telling, more revealing of who you are, than any hand-tightness shake, any touching grasp, could e'er convey yet I promise, forsworn upon the cross of the north west Pacifico latitude and longitude a latitude that just happens to intersect my olden, new english state, knowing that Interstate 90 a straight transcontinental shot, and the car keys just an impulse grab away to tell your arms, your face, your back, our hands, that when you love my poetry, you love me, you friends, are an affirmation of Pablo Neruda's words: ***"whoever discovers who I am discovers who you are"*** fondness is not distance constrained, touching grasps pay no obeisance to time, the honor of your affection permanent affirmed and enflamed, all mine, sublime, to lead my heart, where to lay hands upon your back, to realize even more our single united rhyme
November 7, 2015 4:50 pm nyc/nl
nat-lipstadt
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Nov 7, 2015
Nov 7, 2015 at 4:58 PM UTC
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