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Twenty feet off sunset It's kind of quiet for a saturday night in Hollywood. I wonder where the crowds gone? my friends must have went off to drink. It's better that I stayed There's quit alot to write I promised myself That I would. The hotel room is quiet except the ringing in my ears from the amps and the crowd. Here in room 227 the loud has dripped to empty alone at last,where I feel normal almost. My thoughts and memories have always been too big not shallow not empty. I wouldn't rise to watch others fail Compassion really did me in. A pounding heart,and brain I couldn't stop neither And Iv'e surely tried they just got stronger. Although 227 would appear empty It's filled with many others who have influenced me to rid the sedation.
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Dec 5, 2012
Dec 5, 2012 at 2:00 PM UTC
Compassion really did me in
Twenty feet off sunset It's kind of quiet for a saturday night in Hollywood. I wonder where the crowds gone? my friends must have went off to drink. It's better that I stayed There's quit alot to write I promised myself That I would. The hotel room is quiet except the ringing in my ears from the amps and the crowd. Here in room 227 the loud has dripped to empty alone at last,where I feel normal almost. My thoughts and memories have always been too big not shallow not empty. I wouldn't rise to watch others fail Compassion really did me in. A pounding heart,and brain I couldn't stop neither And Iv'e surely tried they just got stronger. Although 227 would appear empty It's filled with many others who have influenced me to rid the sedation.
david-divine-brooks
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Dec 5, 2012
Dec 5, 2012 at 2:00 PM UTC
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